This was a great story. I love your writing. I really love weechesters and cannon stories. Thanks!

I loved reading these!

I love it! Very original! And suitably gross! ;)

"Rather disgusting". Yep, demon tape worm, pretty disgusting. Great chapter! I only just now had the time to read it, but I'm really glad I did.

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Wow

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This would have made a great episode. Parasites are SO creepy. Something feeding off you or using you to feed, *shivers*. Poor Sammy. Loved it.

OMG thank you thank you thank you so much! This is amazing!

It is everything I’d hoped for, and more besides! Thank you!

Moments I love:
- Sam smiling at Dean talking to Baby. So THEM!
- “Hollow check and sloping shoulders on such a towering man give the impression of a bare tree enduring a harsh winter.” What gorgeous language!
- “Well, you’re beginning to look like Death, and I mean the horseman. You know, the skinny guy?” Perfect Dean voice! I love how you include humor, just like the show.
- I love the creepy/gross of Sam finding the Snickers! The plot thickens!
- When Sam almost faints…aww! He’s still worrying about the Mark…
- Love the gore/horror of Sam sleep-eating raw meat!
- Dean’s thoughts about the Mark are so painful…so on…
- Poor Sam expelling the worm!
- Dean trying to feed Sam: PERFECT ending!

In other words, I love everything!

I especially love how you used a parasitic monster to comment on the boys’ (including Cas’s) relationship at this point in the story, and Dean’s Mark. Brilliant!

Thank you again!

Great story. Thanks for all of this wonderful reading material. It's been a treat.

What a great idea! I enjoyed this very much-I loved Sam eating so much! I suspect in real life he does have to eat a lot with such a big frame.

Oh my Chuck that was amazing. I didn't know I needed this until now. I just love the way you wrote all of the characters. When I thought Sam died my heart broke but does this mean he will never die?