bro you need to update this its realy good also
i guess katie

This is excellent. I've already read the entire thing on phone! But I notice you haven't updated lately. Please do, because these stories are great.

yeah... no. All these wills mentioning Snape, as if he's not a piece of shit that abuses kids daily and made Harry's school life hell. As if Snape didn't point Voldemort directly at the Potters, getting them KILLED.

Sure, let's leave a Death Eater a bunch of money and possible custody of our baby son! That makes *perfect* sense. And obviously, James being a bit of a bully in school is unforgivable, but that whole pointing Voldemort at innocent babies due to relaying a prophecy, no problem! Here's a million galleons and our baby son!

This story is excellent when are you going to post more chapters? Alfheim... the Elven world in Norse mythology. The tree, Yggdrasil... Just one comment: please review your work. You might already do it, then...whatever. This is great I would like you to continue!

So does Harry actually look like an elf?

My guess that Harry's seventh and last mate is Katie Bell with the way he went all out because of her being hurt and Ginny being the one responsable because of her obsession to have Harry to herself. As for the Trial it should actually be a joint trial between The Wizengamont and that of the Elf King Orilon since it was his grandson and his Family and friend that were targeted to be harmed. Heck with everything going on I would even have the Queen Elizabeth also sit in on that trial to have her say as well. Heck I would mind seeing The Two Monarchs come to an agreement and Allieship between them since Harry is not only An Elf Prince but a Lord of The British Kingdom and head of seven different Families Titles. Plus I would like to see the Dursleys dealt with for their abuses and Neglect of Harry. And it took Harry coming into his inheritance to undo the Damage done to him. I know if I was Harry I would add up all of his vault currency value and they devide by the number of Vaults so they each hold an equal about of money for each of his mates and and then children to use. Plus I don't blame Harry for providing a card connected to the Vaults so the Granger can get what he and Hermione need when they are unable to shop for themselves. Plus also provide for his in-laws in case of a emergency since they are also in a way acting as surigate parents for him since he lost his parents. As for little Teddy my guess is that with this being an AU that the little guy is both Sirius and Remus's son rather than Tonks and Remus don as in Canon. Either way that is going to be one very loved little boy. And you wrote that Teddy is Harry's Godson in this like in Canon. So it would be something if the King develops a Grandfather Bond with that little boy.

So Lily was never Human. And Petunia was never his blood aunt.

Amelia should have also told Ron that The Witnesses against him took the Veritaserum so they could lie. Plus Harry took a look at the Serum so he could gage how much to use for his physiology.

I believe the next girl to become Harry’s mate is Katie Bell due to the clues you left. I also wish that you will update soon as I enjoy your story a lot.

Another well written chapter. HOWEVER, Ron, Molly and Ginerva all got off too easy. Ron admitted to INTENTIONALLY trying to hurt Neville and did not care if he died. He should have his wand snapped, expelled and exiled from Hogwarts for the rest of his life, and had his magic bound and sent to live in the muggle world. Ginny should have the same punishment. Still allowed to finish school? Nuts to that. Molly should have no chance to get out as she wanted Harry dead too. And the old goat should be thrown into the veil. No chance for him to ever interfere with Harry or anyone else.

Please please please come back and continue this story soon please

Please continue soon

I like the idea of the elven blood line and the rest it is good. But your characters seem a little airy with little to no details on what is going on between them and the elven blood line is next to non-existent in how others interact with him or with him them or how it effects him. I would recommend a rewrite with more detail.. plus how is acting like a ten year old on his first date He needs to be more mature than how he is acting around Hermione to me he was not acting his age

I'm guessing Katie for the last mate

His final mate is Katie isn't it?!