I'm loving these short shots, cant wait for more :)

this story is pretty good so far but it needs something to spice it up. I recommend you put willy's dad Wilbur Wonka in the story. Here's the backstory to use:

Wilbur so furiously angry about his son leaving that he sets out to create an Anti-Candy organization called DAC (Dentists against candy). He goes out and recruits hundreds of dentist so he can set out on a crusade against candy. Persecuting candy eaters and slaughtering all those who oppose him by the thousands. We then gathers an army of dentists and marches them up to willy's factory. He besides the Factory trying to starve out Willy and his army of oompaloompas. Wilbur greatly underestimated the defense of his sons factory and the turrets and cannons willy's been testing finally come into play. They open fire and begin mowing down the ranks of dentists united against candy. Wilbur takes heavy losses but his superior numbers begin to make a difference. He marches his army and manages to break down the gates and enter the factory. Intense fire fights with the oompaloompas begin. As willy looses ground he must resort to arming his guests. Putting Violet and Mike in the front lines. They fight intensely and Mike gets hit by some high caliber dental floss bringing him to the ground while blood pours out from him. He grabs violet buy the shirt as he lays there bleeding out and kisses her. He then dies. Violet screams and begins blowing the heads off of the dentists with her candy machine guns. But all is lost. Wonka must activate the self destruct button. The factory blows and with it the whole city. All that's left is a smoldering crater where a great city once stood.

Aww that was so cute!

AHH THAT WAS ADORABLE I NEED MORE

This was good I hope to read more soon... Even though I consider the 71 version the original I didn't like it either even though Gene Wilder did a good job at playing Willy Wonka. The 05 was more with the book except the back story of young Willy.. Gosh I feel sorry for the kid who had to wear that headgear that would suck and it kinda sucks to have braces but the f*ed up head gear... Ugh... I love Tim Burton's creepy gothic dark movies my fave is Alice and Wonderland. And Johnny Depp is very sexy -_- hehe

Sorry! I've been so busy with school I haven't been on much! I LOVE LOVE LOVE the past two chapters (especially the one that takes place IN the factory- it would be cool if you could do more of those!) Anyway, can't wait for more!:)

This is really cute. :) I like to think about silly little details like the main five's favorite colors or their favorite book or animal or whatever. And I think Mike would like snakes (though maybe he went through a shark phase as a kid; maybe he saw Jaws but wasn't frightened by it.) And the format of this ficlet was just perfect. Keep up the good work!

I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in a looooong time. It's my senior year and I'm taking college-level classes which are hella rough. But yeah! I'll try and write more frequent reviews because I know how you feel. I worked so hard on the last chapter of Impressions of Four Bad Parents and I only received three reviews. :( Oh well.

Can't wait for the next chapter! (Also, is it possible to see a ficlet about Mike making Vi watch a horror movie? I'd love to see something like that, if you're still taking prompts.)

Also: shoutout to Linkwonka: WOOHOOO! YOU GO GIRL! (I think you're a girl, haha if not then YOU GO BOYYY)! I have a cousin named Quinn and he hasn't really been in school cause of chemo... and he had to have his leg amputated. But he's really positive about it and he's fighting like a champ :') I think I'll tell him about you, cause that's really inspiring. :)

Good chappie: I love how Violet's favorite trophy is the only one where she got second; that's so deep, and just.. wow. Also, prompt: they go to the gym XD

Wait you never read the book? I'm old I read it years ago I don't like the sequel.. Glad they didn't make it into a movie.. It's called charlie and the great glass elevator...I never really like the '71 version even Gene Wilder did a a great job as Willy Wonka. I kinda like the '05 version since it stuck with book more and the fact that it had Johnny Depp (drools) as Willy Wonka.. I just didn't get the back story as much. But that's just me.. Well I don't got any ideas for yea but plz continue I wanna know how your story Stuck is coming along and are you working on Once Upon Time CATCF... I wanna know what happening in that story too.. I hope over people review I kinda like these mike/violet one shots

Interesting wasn't that only in the book? Can you do them as old people like granny and grampy

THAT WAS SO CUTE AHH!:)

Yes and thank you I'm totally done with chemo and I don't have any undead on what to give you so I gonna sleep now.. Hope to read more and good night

Haha, very funny, I liked this chapter, Good Job -

Okay, I'm logged in now, and I'm sorry for the terribler prompt. I have exciting news. As we speak (well, as I type) a SEQUEL, yes, a SEQUEL of CATCF is in early development. However, we don't know if Burton's going to direct again or if Depp's gonna reprise his role as Wonka.

Just thought you'd like to know.

Also... more prompts!
They both watch a Disney movie (NUDGE NUDGE BEAUTY AND THE BEAST NUDGE NUDGE) and Mike keeps being a jerk abput the movie "being realistic."

To be more blunt,
Drawing
Old friends
Shopping
Snowflakes