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Ahhh, all the drama you put my OTP through is quite nerve-wrecking *sighs*.
Still, I absolutly loved it!
I truly adore the way you manage to describe surroundings and tiny little details such as the newspaper in Draco's hand or the sound of Astoria's shoes klicking on the floor. It makes the whole story even more alive!
Regarding the actual content: I really liked that you portrait one of the difficulties that are likely to occur in a marriage. It is written in a very realistic and believeable way!
Also, in my opinion Draco and Astoria were both very much in character. And even though I always imagined Astoria a little different, it is a very welcome change to see that she has the courage to talk back to her husband and shows him her own arguments about the shoe/floor/mantle/earring topic.
I also liked that Draco thought back to his own parents and compared his wife's behaviour to his mother's.
And my, the last sentence really made me smile again! I'm glad that they know they still love each other!
Other than that, the story flowed really well, and no detectable SpaG issues :)
Really really nicely written! -Lexi-

So sweet. I loved this chapter and the few I read before it. But this definetly is my favourite. And my favorite between itself and Honey love. The second is by the Wandlight.
You wrote them perfectly. It makes perfect sence for Lucius to go, but the way you had him assure Hermione immediately;this made it my favorite story. This and stories where Narcissa tries to win Lucius back with no chance of doing so or stories where she minds very much Hermione's presence are one of my favorites.
It's brilliant. Thank you.

Oh my god Sophie! This was so beautiful and sad and pretty and I loved it? :) Like so much. This just made me want to hug those poor characters :p I don't know who I'm more sorry for, and ugh, all the angst... I loved it! Thanks so much for this :)
Also I loved the scene with Ginny's picture at the end :)
Nice work :)
Cheers!

I was so scared for a moment that he was going to yell at her, but you kept them together. Yay!

Thank you so much for such a lovely, if tense, fic. I loved the hint about what happened to Hermione's personal life because of her relationship with Lucius, and I adored she didn't back down.

"You saved me." For some reason, I found that line hilarious. And I totally agreed with Hermione. He could have saved himself.

I totally loved this.

This was really cute. I'm trying to recall if I've read this pairing before, it's quite rare. I like that Padma approached Cho and that you've shown that she had other things to be upset about (Marietta and DA) rather than just crying over Cedric.

I like how you've written Padma - a lot softer than her sister is shown, and love how kind she is when she goes over to Cho.

Well written and I didn't see any mistakes. I really enjoyed this! :)

aaawww that was adorable!
I never read a Ginny/Gabrielle pairing before, but I managed to get me hooked up on yet another pairing!
I admire your style of writing; I have often tried to write french accents - and failed miserably. But this was really perfect. I liked that you included actual french like 'ma cherie' and the other word :)
Really sweet that Ginny assures Gabby that her parents will always love her, no matter what. And it was really cute to read that it was important to Gabrielle that her mother is part of her future!
Really really nicely done! ~Lexi~

This is fantastically in character! I love this pairing, but there aren't many way to make it work without utterly destroying one or both of the characters in the process. The only niggle I have is that Bella is older than Andromeda. I loved Andromeda's thoughts about Lucius though, because they fit him perfectly. Thank you for this, it's fab :)

I love that you didn't write Harry with any one besides Ginny. I love them and as a couple so much back story and endless possibilities for the future within reason. But please they don't have to have sex with everyone else to understand love and/or sex

(you can't see it but I'm squeeing behind my screen)
Thank you! God, this is perfect, everything I didn't know I was hoping for from this prompt. Ugh, the relationship between the Potters is so great and natural, and their reaction to the news 'we've met Ginny before, son' was perfect. I have nothing to say to this, except that it was perfect and I loved it :)
Thanks again :)
Cheers!

OMG, I absolutely love this! It's so perfect and angsty and omg cannot process my emotions right now.

I love your descriptions of Cedric; they're absolutely perfect. And the way you captured Hermione's conflict was amazing. Cedric's dialogue... perfection. "Well, you are wrong. I'm insane about you, Doctor." I am dying. This is gold.

That last line tied this all up perfectly. I love this so, so much! Thank you for writing this!

Omg I was going to take the treat option on the thread but I'm so glad I didn't! I love this story, especially the part about his grey eyes... I'm in love with this short drabble! Yes I mentioned that already, but it should be said at least twice! Xx

Wow, I love this short story. You are very good.

WHAT? I've never heard of Charlie/fleur before! Great writing, it definitely took me by surprise!

A very good story written by yourself. You have captured the characters emotions really well with brilliant construction of the storyline. Well done