Very well written, and an interesting point of view. Thanks for sharing!

Wow. This was powerful. The way you've gotten inside his head, I actually felt sorry for him, but then, I love Jack so that was never going to be hard for me lol.

I loved the way you described their background. I know Sharon loved him deeply at some stage and I love when people acknowledge that.

The bit about Jack no longer being apart of "them" so sad.

I have to confess, I half expected him to top himself at the end. And so I was delighted when he didn't. In my mind, this Jack you've created has it in him to pull it off this time. I truly choose to believe this was the wake up call he needed.

Loved it, Thankyou xx Kitty :-)

You know it's funny, my muse has a thing for letting Jack bend her ear, too!

I like the way you got inside his head, here. His innate selfishness has been so much a part of their lives and he can't even recognise it for what it is - so very true of this character. Good job!

I could see this is they meet and how he charmed her into loving him. This was beautiful oh Jack you damn fool. I'm glad she had moved on with Andy and hopefully Jack can repair his relationship with his kids. Loved it!

I'm so glad that you Musey made you write this.I really do hope that Jack is able to get his life together and have a relationship with hims kids. Great job.

Wow great insight into Jack's head. Though I don't like what Jack did to Sharon and their kids I've seen first hand what addiction can do to a person and know sometimes its not intended to hurt someone its the addiction controlling them. I'm just happy Sharon gave herself a chance to live and to be cared about the way a person should be.

This was some pretty powerful writing. Amazingly out together!

Ok, that was unbelievably wonderful! I have conflicting feeling about this Jack! I hate him for what he did yo his family, but I pity him for addiction! Damn PT, you have me all twisted up inside! Do great! Great job my lovely!

I have always understood the Jack dynamic. Thank you for expressing it beautifully

Loved it k bear! Please keep going with it (: