Awesome story. Hope one day you can come back and finish it!

How did Annabeth use the wings? Plot! That's how. Then she managed to bowl over Percy not just once, but twice with them, because she can't get away if she can't be beyond prodigious with the wings. This chapter is just an exercise in lazy writing, not much else to say.

I had a brief flicker of hope when you mentioned that forgiving didn't mean letting her back in, then you murdered it with "But if she forcibly inserts herself back into his life...". Cool, very cool. Screw everything up then ignore his wishes when he doesn't want to give you the chance to give it all again.

This may be the second of many reminders that Percy deserves far better.

Ugh, there's Annabeth's fatal flaw showing. Having read the story up to this point and the confirmation from the author going forward that it's going to be Percabeth, I'm disappointed to be honest.

Annabeth gets it in her head that the best way to go 'we need to be more independent from each other' is 'I'll cheat on him lol. This is the best plan. My plans are great'.

Just ugh. Percy deserves better.

Dungeons and Dragons is the greatest thing in the whole world. That's all I have to say.

I DIDNT ASK TO BE A HERO SEEKING PRAISE! BEING A HALFBLOOD, IT'S SCARY, AND MOSTLY GETS YOU KILLED IN VERY NASTY WAYS!

is it too late for me to offer you my entire life force for updates on this masterpiece?

This is a great story! Not to be pushy or anything, but its been like 3 years. I really hope you update at some point!

Just read this whole thing. It was pretty darn awesome.

TL:DR Please come back and finish the story.

Hello? LostHeroGuide? I don’t know where you went, I don’t know if you’ll see this but... could you please come back? I enjoy the story, interesting premise and entertaining arcs, and just would really like to see it finished. I’d like to see narrative threads wrapped up and the general story come to the conclusion. So yeah, just would like an update on what happened to you and this story, and please finish this wonderful story you have here.

Wtf. I've 9noy read 2 chapters and I already cannot stand it. Why does percy speak like a foreigner, he's from America! I hoped this would be a decent one but can't believe how much you've ruined such an amazing character

I'd know I said I'd stick through but I just can't. You played almost all the demi-gods off as unlikeable pricks and it's almost entirely impossible to sympathize with them. Normally if it was just that I wouldn't care but coupled with what I already said and how later on this is supposed to be a romance between Percy and Annabeth I just don't see it happening in a reasonable enough way for me to believe it.

God, I have to say I like the concept but almost nowhere it's going. It's like every avenue that could be explored to make this a really interesting story is just ignored for ones that I just find lackluster or outright boring.

That and holy fucking gods almighty your portrayal of Percy is one of the most inconsistent and unbelievable ones I have ever seen. Now don't get me wrong here there are parts of it that fit the Percy Jackson vibe but you completely ignored all of the developments you made for him as character to strictly stick to that. Hell, the only thing that really seems to stick is that you said he had PTSD in passing a couple of chapters back. The only other thing I can think of that really stuck or has changed for him as a character is that he learned not to blindly trust people and to be honest that's a stretch as he just does it again later.

I'd expect him to be bitter, outright resentful even not...this. It feels like any real character development that should have, no was there is just completely ignored by the next chapter. That's without even getting into you majorly implying that Annabeth outright treated him like dirt in his greatest time of need and maybe even cheated on him. That's the type of stuff to turn love into hate really quick.

I'm gonna keep reading through to see how you pull it together as the set up is pretty worrying but the concept and overall entertainment value are pretty good. Over and out I guess...

This is dope.

Update plx