I do hope that you you reconsider and finish the story. The story Is really very interested I would like to know what happens to the survivors and who killed the crew. I do wish that you would finish the story thank you

Great beginning fabulous storyline but I wish you finish

Too bad
it was a great beginning
Miss Dr Scott too

I totally don't blame you. Some of my friends think she's still alive. No way. The show is written by dudes. They just don't get it. The magic of the show is ruined since the star was killed. But for what it's worth, I seriously enjoyed your writing!

I know how you feel. The Last Ship went from "I can't wait until it comes on" to "who gives a ship?" :) I even tried to watch it...give it a chance. I just can't get into it.

I agree with you. Bad move killing off Rachel.

Don't blame you one bit I've been watching the the magic is gone its not the show I fell in love with if it gets a fourth season it'll be a miracle

I can't blame you for your decission, I didn't even watch the episode, I waited to see if she was dead or alive and once I read she was gone, I dropped it. I'm so done with this tv season and characters I love being killed off... 2016 has completely failed me so far...
Thank you for letting us know.

You are missing a great show and Tom is really upset that she is gone. This whole season, Steven Kane says is a reflection on Rachel who is very much on Tom's mind,

I hope you keep going!

I just found your story and read it. I really like it and look forward to reading more of it. Thanks so much for sharing.

Thanks for the update. Best wishes on the move and the job and the house and car hunting. I'm sure you'll settle in for this new adventure soon.

Can't wait to read it

Wow you really know how to torture us...First off what else could go wrong? You had them hit by all sides. Hopefully the president will survive the attack. Also please can they repair the NJ? I am particularly fond of this top of the line destroyer. I can't wait till you tell us how everyone is doing. It is weird but I always thought of the attack on the show as a lone gunman scenario. However your interpretation could be a foreboding of what is to come on the show. I am truly enjoying this exciting and terrifying story. Rios is going to give the captain HELL 10 x over for diving into the water with Rachel. Sorry to hear they lost so many more incredible sailors during the battle.

good luck with ever thing.