Really nicely written! You really know the characters. More canon Sirius stories please :D

A very good look at an enigmatic encounter. I like this, a lot!

Good Story

The first half of the story, after Dumbledore believed Sirius, I kept yelling at him to heal those damn wounds before Sirius would bleed to death. So I am glad he did in the end.

Though I do not like Dumbledore, this story is interesting as it shows a conversation not often displayed and you did a good job.

It is not bashing in the slightest, but merely showing Dumbledore as a human who made a grave mistake and Sirius the way I've always seen him, strong and distrustful of those he doesn't hold close; Dumbledore included.

I love that he admits that he didn't trust Dumbledore and his reasons why, very insightful.

Good story and well written.

It was odd to here a story where Dumbledore is called Albus rather than Dumbledore, but it was still lovely and I suppose since it was from his PVO it made sense. Sirius's characterisation was absolutely wonderful as well. XXX

God, that was a high stung fic. You had my heart racing at parts and me sobbing at others. I love the fact that you included both sides of Dukbledore- it was nice to read something that niether made him seem perfect or completely evil.

There were a few mistakes. The sentence :Albus felt the need to cave in on himself. “That is a faults of an old man, I’m afraid.” doesn't make sense. But otherwise it was beautiful! Well done :)

beautifully written. I could envision every flicker of expression and Sirius and Dumbledore are both written to their characters. I am hoping you will write more chapters on Sirius' last years that span OOTP and HBP.

This is such a good slice of canon. Your interpretation of Dumbledore is spot-on. So many people think of him as either the manipulator or the kindly old man, but very few realize he's BOTH. Well-done!

This was really good. There's a couple errors, but other than that I think it's perfect. I think you captured the characters very well and you made me tear up a bit.