Huh, Sasuke called Naruto 'a murderer' and what is a ninja if not a killer for hire. Wtf? Rather hipocritical on his part. Or is so torn from reality that he don't know that it no game.

Very interesting to put the brothers so soon, no? Is this really a good thing? What is it supposed to mean without the threat of Katsuya? All of this changes call me to wonder. Good Job!

Quiero mas

good story, I hope to continue soon, I hope soon come out as couples are known, the minimum of naruto and anko, as it is almost unlikely at least for the time of sasuke and hanabi, see you, bye!

Great work

this might as well be a sasuke story as he's the only one who's actually getting trained while Naruto does nothing just like in canon

loving this story much prefer the anbu aspect and I'd love to see this work differently instead of the same old sasuke leaves but the chase is with the anbu

Loved the new chapter. I wonder what you guys did to change the backstory for Asura and Indra. I love seeing the struggle for Naruto to fight of his murderous urges. I always wondered why he never REALLY went on a rampage, except against Pain and when he hit Jiraiya. I mean, I'm guessing it's pretty hard to fight the will of an extremely old beast that just hates shit. Can't wait for the next update.

I really like how you have developed this story by taking a somewhat unique idea and also how you decided to take advantage of a character with so much potential like Zabuza and making him team up with Mei. Itachi is the best uchiha and his sickness never allowed him to show how truly powerfull he could have
Been. My only critique would be that you lighten up a bit on the angst and mix it up with a bit more of action and dialogue also show what other abilities Naruto has acquired and how he can keep on getting better. He has even more potential than Sasuke and hopefully that is proven in upcoming conflicts. Hopefully soon we can see the beginning of Ankos and Naruto relationship by next chapter which btw is the most underated pairing and has loads of writing potential. They have so much in common by some aspects of their personality and their tragic past but also are different in good ways that complement each other want to see how they forge a bond. Please update as soon as possible.

Great chapter as usual, keep going.

Having just discovered this story, it sucks that I like it so much. I came for the pairing but stayed for the plot. I'm a little worried how long it took to get to this point. I can only hope when Naruto and Anko become a thing, it happens fast.

This is certainly an... interesting fic.

It's a shame the first half of it is almost as boring as it is interesting - world building is good and all, but too much without any entertainment value becomes mind-numbing and tedious to read.

I've enjoyed reading the Chuunin exams so far. Kakashi fucking Yugao was certainly quite the development that I wasn't expecting, and I have to admit I really wish Naruto had killed Sai - not cause I don't like Sai, but just for what it would have done to Naruto (probably got him killed, I grudgingly suppose).

The introduction of Indra and Asura is intriguing, and to be perfectly honest the only thing I'm actively looking forward to reading more about.

The one thing that really stuck out to me in my reading of this fic is that it seems stuck on the angst with none of the adventure to counter-balance. Or more accurately, what counter-balance there is seems disjointed and out of place, and very rarely entertaining.

I have to finish the chapter but when I read these lines I just smiled and had to review about it.

. Moving his face directly in front of Danzo's own, Itachi whispered in a flat voice, "I will be watching, carefully. If I discover any deception in what you have said, or any foul play regarding Sasuke, I will not hesitate to intervene. I am not a man you would wish to have as your enemy, Shimura Danzo."

With those words Itachi ghosted out of the house silently, leaving Danzo alone in the room. Standing with calm composure, the man ambled towards his kitchen with the intent of boiling tea, what visible portion of his face divulging no hint of emotion. Only the slightest tremble of his unbandaged hand betrayed him.

I just knew there was no way Itachi would sit by while anything could happen with Danzo and Sasuke

I love how Shikaku loses his shit after feeling the Kyubis Charka, or im assuming thatswhat the ending is. Great chapter!

First off thanks for comimg back and continuing the story second I'm not quite sure what's going on I know Indra and asura came back like hagoromo did but I'm not sure what they did to sasuke and naruto respectfully. In any case u wait forever to update the story and u leave it on a cliffhanger... Fucking asshole. But seriously glad to see you and the story continuing. Its hard to find a good story who's author/authors actually want to finsh their story on these kind of sites.