The MC is kinda unlikeable. She let everyone die with even trying, trying to help them! She thinks she is a good Person but she is not even close. Naruto is still an outcast. Her wanting to take care of naruto is kind but he wouldn’t have need to be taken care of if she bother to tell anybody instead of getting all that many people killed.

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Ok I dont understand this first she rejected her mother I can understand that because she was hit by her but there was no mention what so ever that she wanted or even thought about being a ninja I know she is broke after her being orphaned with her fathers death but to just suddenly decide that she was gonna be a ninja is a really wishy washy reason not to mention that having her father killed by ninja isn't a good motivator

Yes nice to see that you are returning on this I look forward to read your re-write

YAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

can't wait to read your rewrite...just can't seem to find it even though you say it's uploaded...
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hope we get to read the new chapters soon, please check that you have uploaded it

Holy Crap, this is amazing! I mean, like honest to everything, this is now right under Dreaming of Sunshine on my favorite Naruto stories (it's not first because /Dreaming of Sunshine/ lol). The characters aren't OOC but still changed realistically. I love the letter correspondence between Itachi and Misaki (and Akatsuki loves her books XD), "Owl" aka Seitaro (the fellow reincarnation~), and how she treats Kakashi (to name a few things). The quote from Tobirama Senju too, the one about Uchiha and Uzumaki (I died laughing). I am sorry to hear about your sister, I can't even begin to fathom the pain. How has your life been progressing in the meanwhile? I am definitely following you (and probably favoriting you too).
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year,
~Jayla Fire Gal

Shit, I'm sorry for your loss. I hope you feel better soon. Just wanted to let you know that your books are awesome. Again, hope you feel better soon and may your sister find peace in heaven

When my mother died it was almost a year before Could bear to write anything but really sad, sappy poetry. I completely understand taking some time to yourself. I hope things get easier for you and I hope that your loved ones are giving you their full support. Take whatever time you need. And remember to come back to the things that make you happy once you have that much effort back in you. I don't just mean this story or writing specifically, I mean hobbies in general. I send you my absolute best wishes.

Oh God. I'm so sorry to hear thatI am a twin myself and I can't imagine the pain you're going through... if this fic is on an indefinite break that's fine, as long as you take care of yourself. I hope you're okay...

Lol that Avatar reference tho the "MY CABBAGES!"

Just came by again to say I hope you are doing okay!

Thank you for this wonderful story which has made me giggle and bubbly with (and has kept me up way later then I should be). I'm sorry for your loss, and I'm hoping your doing alright.

Awesome so hooked going to add to follow and favorite and going to read some more later thanks for creating and sharing this on here

I'm so sorry for your loss *hugs*