Reviews for Potters Hands: Hufflepuff
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14
Beautiful! Amazingly beautiful!
Davinius Gerard Fogg chapter 1 . 4/13/2018
Nice one! Enjoyed that. Gotta be either Hannah or Luna. Keep writing .
Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 9/24/2017
Nice; now how about the Ravenclaw chapter…?
hunzbookwyrm chapter 1 . 8/29/2017
Great story hope to see more soon.
DarkSorcerer888 chapter 1 . 8/9/2017
Chosen Witch: Marrietta Edgecombe Location: Room of Requirement Adjectives: vengeful, angsty
thebetawholived chapter 1 . 7/2/2017
Fun story, as were the first two. But, you've missed Ravenclaw. What 'claw is more outstanding than Luna Lovegood? With her love of animals, what better place than the Forbidden Forest? But for the adjective, I can't make up my mind between 'unusual' and 'different.'

There are a couple of possible directions I'd consider. One might be how some of Luna's creature friends could get involved in the activities. The second is that I can't imagine the Whomping Willow being vicious toward Luna. But I don't know how either could play into "Harry's Hands."
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2017
Maybe a story with luna? On the express perhaps?
A. Fan chapter 1 . 3/19/2017
I personally enjoy the one chapter format the most, as it doesn't break up the action unnecessarily. Breaking up a sex scene, or even separating out such short stories of flirting and teasing leading to sex just breaks the focus, if you catch my drift.
Lord Silindel chapter 1 . 11/29/2016
Chosen Witch: Pansy Parkinson

Location: Hogwarts express (cabin)

Descriptive Adjective: Hate passionate Sex (Hate fucked) lol
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 1 . 11/26/2016
An amazing one shot here!
FluffyNevyn chapter 1 . 9/15/2016
Assuming you do any more of these...

Chosen Witch: Hermione

Descriptive Adjective: High Strung

Setting: Post Hogwarts (ignoring epilogue hints and any/all weasleys). Hermione is a researcher for the DoM, working on a difficult project that has her extremely stressed out and distracted. Her friends, worried, have sent Harry her way.

Or, following the pattern for the one you haven't done yet...

Chosen: Luna AND Su Li (you haven't done that yet either)

Descriptive Adjective: Unanchored. Ditzy in the extreme.

Setting: Su Li has been getting more and more worried for her friend, who seems to be disconnected from reality. She calls in Harry as a personal favor to see what he can do.
mwinter1 chapter 1 . 5/17/2016
Was Hermione disqualified she was called in one section but not said if she was taken out. Also you a bunch of all seven girls going to the bath but not Hermione? interesting.
keeperofthevoid chapter 1 . 1/2/2016
Hannah
Hufflepuff dorms
Guest chapter 1 . 12/19/2015
Chosen Witch: Bellatrix
Location: 12 Grimauld Place
Adjective: Time trravel
JordanMathias chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
Tonks at Grimmauld place or Fleur at the Yuke ball for me
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