So cute. I love that Goten was most afraid of disappointing his big brother. Goten is a sweet kid.

This is really nice and refreshing! In Dragonball, everything is so intense that it's sometimes more interesting to wonder about the in between times where they aren't punching faces and destroying cosmic monsters

This was so sweet, oh my gosh! I absolutely adored Eighteen's motherly nature and admitting her fear to Goten to make him feel better here. I can totally see something like this having played out after the Buu Saga. Very nice job!

Aaaaawwwwwww!:3Best friends just like their daddies!

Aww, that was sweet. I would suggest proofreading your writing, though, as I caught some typos and stuff. Still, a very cute and sweet story. You gotta love how kind 18 came to be thanks to her family, and we don't get to see her bond with Goten often. Very nice work.

This was an entertaining and surprisingly touching little fic that I'm glad I stumbled upon. I was actually searching for Goten/Marron fluff, but good fics of that kind are hard to come by. So while this one wasn't explicitly about Goten/Marron, it sounded promising, and I decided to give it a chance. Good decision on my part.

While I always enjoyed the idea of Krillin and Goku being close, not just through their friendship but through their children as well, I'd never really considered that Goten could bond with 18 - and because of a legitimate reason at that. So it was a pleasant surprise, and really nice to see. It was also refreshing seeing a bit of the Krillin/18 romance explored, which most fics tend to overlook, unfortunately, and the brief inclusion of Gohan was also very welcome and well-handled.

I hope you consider writing more fics similar to this in the future, because there's so much untapped potential with this concept.

Aww that ending was so cute.

Kawaii

I also like seeing that the characters don't escape their battles without some kind of trauma

This is SO SWEET! The feels...
As a TxM shipper though I do hope Trunks also comes over for some playdates ;) Seriously though would love to see more stories in this vein, whether with Goten or Trunks

Excellent story nice to see Goten being happy to see "Auntie Eighteen" lol

Delightful!

Great story! I loved the ending!
You have great talent with writing, and thanks for writing this again!