I loved it and curious too see where you'd take it this Aca fan wants more ;)

I've never cried while reading fan fiction. Until I really this one. You did an awesome job and I can't wait to see whatever you write next!

This was so horribly sad, it was great! I already loved this song and you made it so much more. You had me thinking Chloe would pop out, out of nowhere even though I knew she wouldn't. Great job!

I think this would make a great turnaround, beca struggles heaps but then something happens and there might be a chance that chloe has been held alive for so long for her medical skills but is found and returns home about the same time that Beca finally manages to go to her grave. ...
Loved it tho, i just hate sad endings.

Wow, this was super sad. I do like that song too. This was really powerful and emotional. It takes a good writer to write something like this that conveys such emotion and sadness. I liked it in a really sad way. You should do more if you want, I'd be interested.