Fuck, this too was an enjoyable read. Yep, I’m guilty as hell. You, sir, are a great writer.

Great story. I kept expecting Tuka and Leilei to walk in on them.

Well done dirty but we'll done I tip my hat to you keep up the good work

J'ADORE ! ILS SONT ENFIN EN COUPLE ! ÉCRIT UNE SUITE GENRE L'EP 12 OU 13 SAISON 1 ! Merciiiiii

Perfection. Hope she shows up in your other fic. Wonderful Itami/Rory this is.

Loved it~

No matter who you are, you can't even fuck like that because no human has that much stamina.

Holly sweet mother of jesus sex on earth. I. Am. Speachless.
I have never read such an intense erotic fanfiction ever.
Amazing. Work.

I think that for "gaining another groan", the verb "elicit" would have been more precise and appropriate.

I read casual conversation b4 this and can i tell you that this completely blew my mind. How the ###k you were able to do such awesome imagery is beyond me. I LOVE THIS AND CASUAL CONVERSATION ! You have now converted me to Gate harem; ) Itami in both fics is awesome. Good job.

This is, hands down, the best lemon I've ever read, the other "detailed" ones can't even compare to this. Great job. I don't care if I sound like a perv right now but this is a review for a lemon and it is great.

My soul now belongs to Lucifer

Consent is sexy. Kinda like how you wrote this, but the group dynamics gonna suck now P

I live for these hawt quality smutt fics!

I'm going to hell for likeing this...I'm fine with that