I loved this story and Im still eagerly waiting for you to finish pokemon gray. I think that you already are one of the best pokemon fanfiction writers in the internet and I hope that you continue doing this.

By the way please continue making fanfics with Pokemon POV like this one, you are good at it and they are my favorite kind of pokemon fanfic.

Honestly, I loved the story. I like to see the different points of view of both persoanjes and to see a history a little darker of this delivery
Although you ask what happened to Leaf?
By the way, do you have plans to work on other pokemon (like RSE or Oras, or maybe XY)? Sure, after finishing your version of B & W
It was a pleasure to read you, keep working like this :)

I've taken too long to say this, but I love Pikachu's personality. He's downright hilarious, and I love reading the chapters in his perspective!

Congratulations on finishing this story! I'm so sad that it's over. I really loved all the characters, especially Pikachu. Hopefully, we will see more of them in the future.

This is amazing. Can you make a sequel?

very good story

I read your Story in just one night, though I'll admit, I read a few chapters when it was starting out.

I absolutely loved it. It was a beautiful retelling/remake/whatever you want to call it of Pokemon Yellow Version.

I hope to read more of your stories soon!

This was awesome thank you for the story

I really enjoyed this story. At first hearing that there would be another POV besides reds, I was wary, but upon discovering the other POV was pikachus, I came to love it. Thanks for writing this, it really was enjoyable and Red is just such a great character that is underused compared to Ash (not that I don't love them both) (I kinda prefer reds style of not traveling with other humans though) what a wild ride!

Beat up in my story was described as being similar to Mewtwo's outrage guess I got it wrong lol so much s Pijachu an electric dark type now? Anyway good chapter

Oooooh I like the reveal of types at the end I wonder what their Megas would be like good chapter and poor blue

What's the other story your writing?

OMG dont have words to describe how much I've enjoyed this story! Its been a wild ride and really took an interesting way of conecting red and team rocket besides the typical Giovanni is his father or his mother is a retired executive. To be completely honest the last battle felt somewhat anticlimactic, which im sure you meant to do but still.. gold's team felt conveniently typed to counter red's and some of red's mon felt like they just git shut down too easily (charizard and espeon) but. I like red's growth as a character saying its nice to lose! Anyways you should really do interesting takes on other pokemon trainers like the protags from the original black and white or from sinnoh, i feel like you could easily work with the moral dilemmas present in those gens. Overall thangs for such a wild ride, ill be eagerly awaiting more!

Lovely Chapter! So is Red eventually gonna face off against Gold?

how can the muk have been giving horsea trouble if it was unconcious?