Your writing and flow is awfully smooth and lets me imagine the dance scene like Loki giving me my own private dance (I wish). It gives me the vibes similar to Rihanna's dance in Valerian.

And the way you describe Thor's past and his thoughts really gives me the chills. Though I notice sometimes you would repeat the same words to describe like 'malicious' one time too many. But the only things regrettable from your fanfic is that ITS TOO SHORT.

The Thorki fandom should feel blessed to kneel at your feet! (Ps. Your fanfic is the only one I actually took the time to leave a review, so you know your fanfic is at a level not many can compare lol).

-Nico Paco-

This was just so incredible! I am in love with this story! It was so hot on how Loki seduced Thor while also falling in love with each other. I just love it. Listening to "Would You Mind" by Janet Jackson while reading Loki and Thor make love in the bedroom... It's just... acahociejuidfnuappi9fnsc! So good, so awesome!

i hope this is not oneshoot story.. please write more thorki. . i really love ur story

Such an amazing story! I really loved it. You write so beautifully :) keep up the good work!

Loved it.

I think that to the hard work that you do, you don't have enough reviews!

Honey, can I have your permission to translate this fic to spanish, please? It's so beautiful and it'll be an honor if you agree.

Well damn, I didn't expect this story to be so good, I loved every second of this story

Wow I love this fic to death! Love the build up!

So I was there, searching short things to read, and found this; I told myself “Oh, no, you haven't time to such long story” but then I entered and you just caught me, I wasn't able to stop reading, your fic is amazing and will go to my favorite list. I hope with all my soul you still writing for the fandom; this is one of the most beautiful things i've read in a while. Your work is great. Forgive me, I not a Native Speaker, actually just can read and understand, lol; but you deserve know how cool you are. Hope you understand xD

The end ? Really ? You did not put your fic as 'complete', so I had hoped you will continue...
But if this is the end, that's alright ! I love happy ending ;) Your story was great, I liked it very much ! It was interesting and sad at first, but the 'comfort' part was perfect. A great story about life (with his beauty and cruelty) and true love (and sexy dances which I loved very much too).
Thank you for this one-shot !

Jane died! You knew I would enjoy that! Thank you!

Naughty, naughty... My, my... I don't think you were ever this explicit, not that I'm complaing.. I welcome more.

Thorki Forever!