This story is extremely well written. You’ve gone and taken canon events, twisted them, then put them into a blender of change with amazing results. I don’t think I’ve found a story quite like this one. It hasn’t been updated in quite a while, and I would love to see more if you ever get back to it. Take care and stay safe.

I know I am only on chapter 2, but I hope sona comes clean and doesnt do any more dodgy stuff.

Nice

No update? Come on dude...

Pretty good, a shame its discontinued but it happens to the best of us

Why the hell would Issei tell a complete stranger about his most important secret. Not that the secret could be used to harm him but confessing everything to someone whom he doesn't know anything about seems just wrong in so many levels.
For all he knows, the person he's talking to could be a mad scientist and capture him and take out his brain to study it.

Shouldn't he be more suspicious of them considering that they were devils.
I mean, if someone was trying to give me such a gift, then I would definitely suspect that they want something from me in return. Especially if that someone was a devil.
Aside from that, the story is very well written.

...its been a Long time since I came back to this...like 4-5 years? I think its been 4 close to 5 but semantics...its really long huh...any chance you might see the tons of comments this story made?
And maybe post a new chapter?
Oh well I wish you all the best...stay safe...

this is awesome make more

I hope it's explained why her sacred gear couldn't heal him (I mean other than the fact the title would make very little sense if it succeeded) because that was mildly depressing.

He finished 2 books of high schools lvl mathematics in 10 min and a university lvl one in 30.

Thats nice and dandy, now how did he show that he did read and understood what he suposely read? Because at no point he proved that he became a genious with the narrative only says he finish them and thats was all and i think to prove that would take him more than 30 min.

So yes, i believe that that part wasnt very well done.

Is he dead

It's really an original path that you took. Truthfully that changes from the Issei that only run towards the enemy, punch, loses and through nakama power finally beats down the enemy.

We know have an intelligent Issei that focuses on the profound study of magic and is able to do thing canon Issei (and most fanfics Issei actually) can't. He is now even at a point where he can teach others. That's great.

Other than that, I see that your plot really completely deviated from the canon, and once more I want to commend you. You took the characters and events that happened in DxD, mixed everything and still achieved to make a good plot whithout plot holes. There is no inconsistency and it's really refreshing to read a fic that actually takes an original path, without minding much the canon.

Well, there are still quite the number of mysteries such as Issei ability to understand and talk all languages but that's what makes thing interesting.
He is also determined to become strong enough for being free, being able to contend against any faction, because he doesn't to be forced to anything (thanks to Asama and Ddraig).

And well, the plots continue to unravel fluidly like everything is already prepared.

I'm eager to read chapter 16 and more.

Thank you once again

It was indeed a great chapter ! The fights were enrapturing and there was no moment where I was lost.

If there was just one point that bothers me, it is that Issei uses to often his Kinetic lance and his dust wings. I know it's human to reuse something we know works pretty well, what's more if it's one's own invention, but considering his possibilities with magic, all that is limiting him is imagination (and magic reserves).

The kinetic lance is good one or twice, but it becomes quickly redundant and it's a little too simple and not that efficacious. I know he prefers to use what's already at disposition instead of creating (wich is all at his honor) but there is not just dust in the air.

He can play with the water present in the air, condense it, create ice, change the amount of oxygen in the air... The only limit is one's own imagination and knowledge in physics and chemisty, which would have been my very problem, but it clearly isn't the case for Issei as he can easily be called one of the most brilliant minds of his time in the subject.

So I think it could be interesting to vary the magic he uses.

Ah, my milicas is so cute ! I can't get tired of him.

That aside, I want to reiterate that his damn choker is annoying. And unfortunately, there is now a second point I will add, I don't like the idea of Issei teaching magic to anyone, much less a useless, clumsy girl.

I'd give so much to have Issei's X-ray eye. Ah, it really is man's romance. Yep !

About the fight, he was great ! We see than even if he fought a ten wings fallen angel, and survived (it's important), he still isn't completely OP. Well, I would like for him to be OP of course, but I also like that he progresses at a realistic rythm and is still far from the levels of Maou or Gods.

Did I say that Milicas is so cute ?