Reviews for DAVID
Marian Simonetti chapter 10 . 7/14
I loved your story...the torture and sexual assault parts were so descriptive that they were hard to get through...but the Steve and Danny friendship was the best...I kind of wished you had another chapter or 2 of the hospital but other than that well done KUDOS
brandywine737 chapter 8 . 11/26/2018
Love, love, love this! I love that David made his mistake and Danny took full advantage. It's such bittersweet justice when Danny gets to take out his own abuser. And Danny's hysterical laugh. I can't get enough of that. And of course, Steve and Danny's bromance. Always love that.
Cubit2 chapter 10 . 12/6/2016
I loved these deleted scenes. It actually worked well to add them at the end like this. Clever.

I guess I have to give you one more "loved" line. He'd always been the glass-is-half-full side of the partnership after all.
Cubit2 chapter 9 . 12/6/2016
I'm in awe of how you showed Danny's incredible struggle to recover in such a short chapter. Wonderfully done. Loved the line about their boundaries becoming weirdly blurred.
Cubit2 chapter 8 . 12/6/2016
Amazing story so far. Dark but tastefully done. I love how you weaved the serious moments and comments with fun ones in this chapter. Steve pulling his shirt off was so in-character but I was expecting Danny to comment on it. ;)

The last line was breathtaking!
Long Live BRUCAS chapter 10 . 12/31/2015
Go Danny on playing possum and killing Abraham before he could kill you and get to Steve. Love Steve there for Danny and knowing just what he needed even if Danny himself didn't know.

The deleted scenes were good. Loved Steve's surprise for Danny.
Evil Cosmic Triplets chapter 10 . 11/25/2015
I like these snapshots of recovery. Deleted scenes are often lovely gifts. I enjoyed reading this story.
Evil Cosmic Triplets chapter 9 . 11/25/2015
I like this glimpse of Danny just starting to heal after having worked through some of the recovery. It works well. It's not long and drawn out, but it does not make light of the recovery process either.
Evil Cosmic Triplets chapter 8 . 11/25/2015
Beautifully orchestrated death scene. I like that David underestimated Danny. The last line: "For the first time in five days, Steve remembered how to breathe." - love.
detectivejiju chapter 10 . 11/14/2015
Wow! The story was horrific...but I loved it ( hehehe... ;) )! Your an awesome writer... Waiting to read more of your stories..
PS: I just love tributes and this has joined it.
Crystal Marionette chapter 10 . 10/10/2015
great story, loved it! Dark, yes, but warnings were given and it was done tastefully. Cant wait for more from you, and I'm loving Tributes thus far as well. Please keep it up!
Crystal Marionette chapter 8 . 10/10/2015
I'm quite happy that Danny was the one to take care of that sick bastard! Can't wait to read the rest :)
Crystal Marionette chapter 2 . 10/10/2015
Now I have no idea how I missed this story, but it is fantastic! Way more deserving than simply 25 reviews. Cant wait for more, and thank you for the warnings. Doesn't scare me any but always good to know!
caramiamy chapter 10 . 9/30/2015
Whoa. Read the first chapter and never realized you had posted the rest. Just finished it all - couldn't stop. Very powerful and I appreciate with how you gave us the agony of Danny without needing to be grossly graphic. The mind is a powerful tool and you allowed us to each paint our own picture. So well done. And I really appreciated your deleted scenes. Made the story complete.
Stryder2008 chapter 10 . 9/22/2015
Very well written hurt/comfort and angst. Just thought you deserved a review.
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