This was one of the best stories I ever read and I wan to see more kisaita. Love your stories and work can you also send me the uncensored version please.

That was a beautiful story with some good ol' oral. I felt like this was pretty explicit as it was, but if you said this was watered down I'm going to find your full story later. Had they done things in that broom closet I might have had an actual nose bleed.

Facials aren't degrading to me. Just very intimate.

Absolutely beautiful. I've never been into oral sex fics but this one was definitely impressive! This is going into my faves.

this was.. freaking amazing! ah I love it all! mmooorrreee

This is your first? More legit than most kisame x itachi fictions around here: most make kisame too emotional and itachi too uke-Ish, but you portray them very well. Nice job especially on details and inner monologues.

~ Kakashi H

Hahaha I enjoyed this a lot,you have to love that dirty word play from Kisame!I like how submissive Itachi was as well.:)

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Ah, this was very lovely. Definitely a must to read for every fan-girl who enjoys submissive Itachi and little barbaric Kisame. (Sort of.) Your writing was incredibility descriptive and with so many little details. You've really managed to depict the scene to the last drop (literally).

The part I liked the most was probably the beginning where Itachi was 'making love' to the dango stick. That was hella hot! Keep up the good work.

The dirty talk, oh god XD
Even I didn't know that about Itachi-san. I want to see more, send more dirty stories into my mind and dirty it some more. Please!

Good story, I look forward to reading more from you w

Oh my! *covers my mouth* Itachi is so naughty!

So to start Kisame is too much! He made me laugh alot. His dirty talk was the best, and he made poor Itachi his little bitch (so he thought). :) I really enjoyed the part when he tells Itachi the time for being prim and proper is long gone lmao! Then he makes Itachi beg.

I think the best thing is that Itachi had this planned out (he is so sneaky.) lmao! :) He wanted Kisame so badly.

Anyways great job. I really loved it!