Shudder-this is really horrific.

I like the title. It really captures the theme of the story well. This is an intriguing story with an interesting point of view. The use of a Muggle-born OC narrator drives home the point that Tom could have taken advantage of anyone. He was obsessed with finding a way to live forever, so it's a bit unbelievable that he'd sexually assault Aimee, but then I guess he might do it for the feeling of power and domination. 'Mudblood', 'Muggle', 'Unforgivable' and 'Imperius Curse' should be capitalised. I've never read anything quite like this. Good job!

why couldnt anybody notice shr needed help

This is intense.

Quick question, where did you get the OC name? Just sounds familiar to me is all.