PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!

Interesting beginning. I look forward to seeing where this story goes.

I like it

Great start. Adding to my alerts, Would love to read more!

How disappointing. I honestly hate it when authors delete their work. I would have rather you just made a new story. Hope you don't encounter any of the problems that usually amount from this.

I actually like your writing style, and voice. Even when writing in someone else’s world, everyone puts their own spin on it. Some are told well, and some need a lot of work. Some are ones you read, hoping it will improve, just to find that was 11 chapters worth of time that you’ll never get back.

You have a clear, concise style, and a fair amount of humour amongst the angst. Well done.
Since I discovered your story from a fave list, I’m off to read your profile, hoping to see if you have your original works published somewhere.

So long but good you back, thank for update and merry Christmas.

cool

This is so cute! I'm glad to see this up again!

Aw~~
Thanks for updating, i like this story and don't worry, we get why you couldn't update earlier.

Vas a actualizar?

Nice! There aren't a lot of Blaise/Harry fic out there. I'm looking forward to reading more, especially Harry's interactions with all the other Slytherins too.

this is cool more pls

please please please continue writing this! the story so far is fantastic!

I like the plot so far (bjust finished ch1), just as a sugestion could you possibly divide the text into paragraphs? It would make it eaiser to read...