This is exactly how I imagined their first time. You captured Goku's character perfectly! Can't wait to read tge rest

This is incredibly good writing keep it up

This is so good, please update soon :D

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Your style flows and is easy to follow. You described every incident completely, without having to use unnecessary words. Very nice!

Looking forward to your updates!
And a very Happy New Year to you! :)

Aww, I love this story so much!

This story is so sweet! And you write so well! I really love it!

Aww it was cute

Wow what an amaging story...i can't wait to see ur next work...

Wow I do not know what to say: this is just so great it's brilliant and so wonderful.

Goku and Chichi spending time together story is more delightful than any fic were Goku has to fight some bad guy.
Love to read about how,when and where these too fall in love with each other.

Your are writing a perfect fic with the love all the GoChi fandom needs. So please don't worry about the fights, this is amazing.
Totally LOVE this chapter

Baby Gohan is on thee way, can't wait for the next chapter

OMG I'm crying! Its Perfect!

I don't care if there's no villains and threats in your story as long as its simple and enjoyable. And you're doing a very good job with these chapters! :D

Super adorable. I don't mind that there is no antagonist. I'm just enjoying the development of the bond between them. Keep it up :)

Oh wow this is beautiful. (Of course; I expect it to be such coming from you). I was absorbed and lost in it all. Cute and funny and then hot and sensual and ahhhhh the ending and omigosh it was just so satisfying to read all around.

"With her, he was part of something bigger than himself, and it was somehow overwhelming." - love this line.

I love love love the last section when he's just outside doing his thing, getting firewood and stuffz like all is normal and then she cries and he like rushes so fast to get to her and then when she tells him she's pregnant and he's confused at first but then - omigosh I could gush so much about this scene. I love it so much. Amazingly well done. Hee~

excellent job! I would love to read more :)