I don’t get why people keep bringing in OP characters just to nerf them or have them hide their powers. This is just canon event retold with someone that is vaguely similar to Galen.

Wtf, Galen just goes along with being treated as a slave after all the shit he went through. This is fucking dumb.

This started in 2015, and last updated in 2018. This has taken at least a year for 12 chapters. My Patience can last for a few more years.

Amazing story, hope it isn’t dead

Uh. Two chapters and not a single strangulation. Pathetic.

If I was Galen, I would have take the throne.

The laundry made me laugh, but Galen dressing her killed the fic for me.

I despair at how few summoned non-Saito bash Louise's face in. I think I've seen her slapped once only.

Hey really amazing story I utterly and thoroughly enjoyed it! From chapter 1 to 12. I am a avid fan of star wars the force unleashed series and also the familiar or zero. The fact that you made Louise a Jedi is freaking awesome and that Siesta is a mandalorian. I can't to see what Kota or Vader and the emperor will think of Louise. I really love this story you an awesome writer, I hope you continue this and don't get discouraged by haters that don't know real talent until it smacks them in their face. I and really looking forward to more of this fantastic story I can't wait so please don't stop writing this I will be very very and mean very heartbroken emphasis on heartbroken quote on quote that stopped this because of something someone said. I hope I encouraged you to keep on writing. I you need any help on ideas please let me know. Also you should put taibata and Tiffania and Louise's sisters as well I very curious to see how they will react to Galen Starkiller Malek and there sisters now founded power. Also I am working on a star wars game projects if you are interested I need a creative writer like you to help my story come to life. For my games I will give the titles when you respond to my invite and my review. You are a great writer and keep on doing what you are doing. Keep the great work hope to see and read more of your awesome work. Don't let anyone or anybody get down or keep you from writing this amazing story. God bless and May the force be with you always and forever.

This has got to be the best Familiar of Zero crossover I've read overall, and I've been perusing around for quite awhile loosely!

The way you foreshadow and connect things, intricately pieced the master-apprentice relationship between Galen and Louise, the Mandalorian wrinkle in a very good way, and hosting a full knowledge of Expanded Universe history to make things all the richer... it is GLORIOUS to see!

Thank you so much for the thrilling read, and I hope that this story continues once more - it's going so many places of interest, even a potential Empire-Rebellion skirmish over the FoZ planet if possible, just a big cog in the scheme of things I'm eager to see play out.

This story was amazing in the twelve chapters so far and has lasted this long without a single spelling mistake. Please continue to write more chapters continuing this story.

Thankyou for writing such a compelling story with rare talent that few possess. I hope this is a trend that will continue onwards.

Please upload the next chapter this month.

Meh, FoZ stories are riddled with characters that needed to be nerfed for the sake of the plot.

yet another powerful character that's enslaved and just takes it like a good little bitch... why do ppl keep doing this with FoZ crossovers... it made some sense that wimpy saito couldn't stand up for himself, but not crossover characters like bloody starkiller

Ah, so you are taking the lazy route.

Is it just me, or are you making Starkiller seem a bit soft?