Reviews for Ashs Hoenn Journey
Guest chapter 2 . 1/15/2018
Please keep going with this story it is amazing I like how he’s going to a different place and not going head to head to gary
Straw Hat Lily chapter 2 . 1/27/2017
I always catch a ralts right after Wally does in Pokémon omega ruby and alpha sapphire, just tonight my GARDEVOIR defeated elite four Steven's mega metagross when she was about to be one shot it said "your Pokémon held on to show it's love for you!" And bam shadow balled that meta gross' face! Made my day after he KOed my mega sceptile. So please could you make him catch a ralts for me?
Generalhyna chapter 2 . 6/29/2016
Please give ash a Duskull they are kick ass
Hashirama 1710 chapter 2 . 5/6/2016
A ralts would be cool
Hashirama 1710 chapter 2 . 5/6/2016
Update soon please
Lloryn chapter 2 . 4/27/2016
I like where this is going, as for pokemon suggestions.

I always liked how Ash was with Pikachu and have a hard time picturing him without an electric type, it also surprised he never caught more electric types. So there for I suggest an electric type like a Electrike/Manectric, or maybe a Plusle & Minum duo - I can see them causing quite some mischief. Or a devious Pichu (they were introduced in Hoenn weren't they?).

Ash being Ash he generally ends up with the regions starters so Mudkip and Treecko are definitely a must.

A flying type can't be missed in Ash' team so Swellow or maybe a Skarmory or both.

Corphish! Ofc ash has to catch the little chap, altho I don't know how old Corphish was when Ash caught him in the anime.

Trophius would also be a good addition to his team. I'd imagine that a female Trophius would be affectionate and caring(think of the role Bulbasaur played in the anime), also a flying grasstype would be quite unique no matter how you look at it.

Also can't forget about Torkoal, he was always one of my favorites of Ash's Hoenn team, just an adorable emotional and quite the powerhouse when trained well.

I like the suggestion someone made of ash catching a Bagon which he will evolve into a Salamance.

Also Donphan! Another one of my favorites, and lets be honest he makes a great team with Ash.

It would be a nice idea if Ash could find or get/earn/win a pokemon egg that would hatch into something different like maybe an physic type? I saw someone suggest a Ralts, altho I would suggest a male Ralts for the simple fact that I like Gallade better and also Gallade is dual fighting type and Close Combat is a pretty kick-ass and effective move. Also have you seen Gallade Mega evolved form? Besides I think it would be nice for Ash have a pokemon that he can communicate with.

Other than that maybe a dragon type or two and a troublesome Sharpedo maybe(think of the excitement catching that one would be to write - a Sharpedo tormenting people, Ash being who he is would catch it if only to help the people out)?

Also isn't it tempting to have him catch a legendary? I know we all think about it once in a while.

There are so many pokemon he could catch. I hope my selection was helpful!
Looking out to the next chapter, keep up the good work!
Dark Serpent Cat chapter 2 . 2/16/2016
I would love

1) Ralts (or beldum) Would Ralts be a fairy type or pure psychic? Either way Gardevoir and Blaziken duo are awesome

2) feebas (it drives me nuts how difficult it is to catch it. This is a pokemon I would love but can never find.) or Carvanha

3) oddish or budew (I know you said no Sinnoh but since Rosalia is part of Hoenn I am hoping this coud be an exception as I prefer pokemon who evolve)

4) Bagon (Yay dragon types and Salamence is awesome)

5)Duskull or Shuppet (depends on mega evolution or not plus I remember May running into a Duskull on her way to Birch's lab)

Oh and thank you for going Torchic route Torchic is a favorite starter of mine and I hate how every does treeko more

Anyways I hope you update soon

Oh and suggestion about one of Ash's original pokemon. With Charmander what if nurse Joy overheard that abusive trainer and went looking for charmander saving him and sending him to Oak for help?
movielover312 chapter 2 . 10/9/2015
How about a Bagon or Beldum later on in the beginning, I recommend poochiyena if I spelled that right, maybe a magikarp maybe a shiny magikarp if you want.
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 2 . 9/9/2015
I liked the chapter. Well, DEFINITELY:
1. Torkoal
2. Taillow
3. Treecko
xXDeidara-chanXx chapter 2 . 9/8/2015
Torchic is adorable!
A really good start and sound reasoning for a 10-year-old.
A possible Pok'emon could be Medite, I haven't Seen that one used before and it can be quite strong, has cool and useful evolutions, Even a Mega one...and does help to round up a team.
It can use Fight and Psychic moves and can have awesome abilities.
Thanks for this so far!
XXX
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 1 . 9/8/2015
Actually, Bulbasaur evolve into Ivysaur before becoming Venusaur. The same [to a degree] can be said for Charmander and Squirtle. Charmander evolve into Charmeleon before becoming Charizard. Squirtle evolve into Wartortle before becoming Blastoise. Nice cliffhanger, though.
orca3553 chapter 2 . 9/8/2015
good story, let him catch a female ralts, and maybe the other two hoenn starters and i cant wait for the next chapter.
NarutoDawg9406 chapter 2 . 9/8/2015
I like this story it has a lot of potential and I recommend ash catching Aron since that evolution is so awesome
The Sith'ari chapter 2 . 9/7/2015
Can you have Ash meet Charmander in the Hoenn Region, in fact can you have Ash meet Charmander in your Sinnoh Quest and Johto Adventure fanfic also? You can't deny that Charizard is one of Ash's most powerful Pokemon, also if you have Charmander be abandoned in Kanto while Ash is in Hoenn, he will die since the only reason Charmander is alive in the anime and became a powerful Charizard was due to Ash, Misty and Brock rescuing him from the rain, without them being there Charmander is done for.
The Sith'ari chapter 1 . 9/7/2015
So will the pairing be Advanceshipping? Also I didn't get a chance to ask this when I reviewed your Ash's Sinnoh Quest and I decided to wait until I review this fic when I read you Ash's Johto Adventure fanfic, will Ash eventually travel all six regions in your three Pokemon fanfics or will you keeping Ash to Johto, Sinnoh and Hoenn?
29 | Page 1 2 Next »