I've read this story several times now, but never took the time to review. I had to correct that mistake because I really feel the need to let you know how wonderful this story is. I know it's just a two-shot and will possibly not have any continuation but I certainly hope you will come back to it at some point and add more.

I absolutely love your take on Undertaker. I feel you captured his actions and thoughts very well which made him seem so in character. This has to be the best written Undertaker I've encountered so far and it makes me want to read about him more, but more specifically your version of him. From start to finish I enjoyed just reading the interactions between both characters here and that leads me to your oc. I thoroughly enjoyed her presence in the story and I'm eager to know more about her. I love your approach to her character and how she thinks and as I've said already it makes me want to know more about who she is and how she'll develop in the future. You've really done a good job with Cheryll, it's always nice to read about a good oc.

This is such a great read to come back to when I just want a well written story that keeps me entertained. Though I long for more of it, I am satisfied with what I've got. However, I can't stress enough how much I would love for you to continue because I do enjoy some good Undertaker stories, which sadly I don't find many that keep as intrigued as this one. If you have any recommendations I'd love to know! Anyway, great job with this and I'm definitely interested in reading more stories from you!

Well hey This is great! Wish it had more chapters to expand on her and Undertakers relatinship! See them move up some levels (if ya know what I mean [*winkwink*[) x3

Oh please say you'll continue with this, this one of the most well written undertaker x Oc fics ive read to date!

My hopes went up only to crash down lmao. But congrats nonetheless!

I really like this fic! I think you managed the sophistication quite nicely

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I absolutely loved it! The interactions and dynamic was just as intriguing! Please don't give up on this story! Keep it going! Good luck on your next update! XD

*Squeals* YESSS OMG! XD I soooo sooo ship these two! Undertaker is forever so cute! I WANNA HUG HIM! X3 Thank you so much for the extra chapter I simply love it! Cheers!

I'm not that much into this fandom, but i really like this story already.
If you can, please continue to write for it! I'd love to read more :D

You updated! i thought this was just one shot. but im overjoyed when i got the update notice. and i hope you succeeded with your original fic

How cute. I must say, this was certainly different from any fanfictions I have read about Black Butler. I enjoy the different take on the Undertaker's life/personality/past/whatever you want to call it. Is it over now? If it is, what a cute ending.

*screams like a man* I have always shipped this ship and seeing them together again is enthralling. This was a nice break and a great pick up for my morning. Thank you for the update! :D

Absolutely marvelous! I can't remember the last time I read something that evoked such emotions! Loved your story. Congratulations
:3

Great story! I loved it! :)

This is so good!

Awwww