Reviews for Escape the Depths of Hell
James Birdsong chapter 3 . 4/9/2016
Good three chapters of course.
Gianna45332 chapter 3 . 2/26/2016
its really great, i hope you cont. this.
PpgzxRrbzcrossover2016 chapter 3 . 2/20/2016
Please update
N. Risa chapter 3 . 12/29/2015
Finally, i did like the chapter however, i was a tad bit disappointed with the length and content.
It's embarrassing but i wanted a bit more on their lunch; Brick's emotions when she took a bite of the meal, did she like it? Hate it? Was she uncomfortable with the rrb stares? How much did brick enjoy her being there? Did he unconsciously lean closer to her; stealing glances as she cowered in their presence? Was she analysing the situation? Looking for points of escape. Most importantly what was Butch's reaction? We all know boomer is a twat, but Butch? Lol. Just some ideas on lengthening a story. I love 2-4k word chapters.
Any way, love it. Hope writer's block will cease and desist.
~N. Risa
Guest chapter 2 . 8/31/2015
Interesting
N. Risa chapter 1 . 8/29/2015
Good stuff, please continue. I always encourage whenever I finally see good writing and not that POV crap. I love this.
~N. Risa