| Reviews for Escape the Depths of Hell |
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James Birdsong chapter 3 . 4/9/2016 Good three chapters of course. |
Gianna45332 chapter 3 . 2/26/2016 its really great, i hope you cont. this. |
PpgzxRrbzcrossover2016 chapter 3 . 2/20/2016 Please update |
N. Risa chapter 3 . 12/29/2015 Finally, i did like the chapter however, i was a tad bit disappointed with the length and content. It's embarrassing but i wanted a bit more on their lunch; Brick's emotions when she took a bite of the meal, did she like it? Hate it? Was she uncomfortable with the rrb stares? How much did brick enjoy her being there? Did he unconsciously lean closer to her; stealing glances as she cowered in their presence? Was she analysing the situation? Looking for points of escape. Most importantly what was Butch's reaction? We all know boomer is a twat, but Butch? Lol. Just some ideas on lengthening a story. I love 2-4k word chapters. Any way, love it. Hope writer's block will cease and desist. ~N. Risa |
Guest chapter 2 . 8/31/2015 Interesting |
N. Risa chapter 1 . 8/29/2015 Good stuff, please continue. I always encourage whenever I finally see good writing and not that POV crap. I love this. ~N. Risa |