Interesting

Update plz

Great chapter

Great read

Great work

Interesting story

omg yaay a update and on Valentine's day to read I'm doo happy!

Write more soon please.

Hi! I’m really enjoying how you’ve managed to combine the characters from both worlds and they’re interactions with each other. I’m looking forward to seeing where this is going. My only concerns are that the phrasing in some instances is very bumpy and ends up disturbing the otherwise wonderful flow that you’ve built up. Also occasionally it appears that your spell check has replaced the word you’d expect with something odd. Overall if you can find a halfway decent beta you should be able to clean up any issues with your story pretty quickly. I look forward to reading the rest of the story and your future works!

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Lovely update thanks ever so much

Nice

I totally didn't realize this had been updated I'm sooo happy! there is abit spelling error but omg I can't get over this story is continuing! I hope u continue onto the Lord of the rings,and hope tom still has abit of a mean streak/slytherin cunning to keep those orcs away from his family.

I’ve enjoyed reading your story!

Thanks for the update