Hope to read more soon.

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Amazing!

I really hope you share some more of your story. I love your humor. I’m looking forward to more.

Stop rushing things up! Slow down! Damn it!
A police officer who doesn’t know enough self defense to fend off a pathetic human... where were her weapons?
You know what? I give up on this story.

What’s your problem with passionate women? Just because she is attracted to this dream boys doesn’t mean she’s a “wanton whore”.
Also, since when the police hire people by phone? Shouldn’t she go to a police academy first? Can she even fight?
Honestly, I am starting to think this story is a crazy mess. You gloss over basically everything, I have no idea of your OC’s personality,because you don’t describe her to me.

Lots of grammar errors and missing words in this chapter.
I love the idea, but the first chapter felt rushed and incomplete in my opinion. The narrative wasn’t well detailed, I felt difficulty trying to picture what she was seeing and feeling; there was none of that magical/misty impression of a dream.
Also, I kind of expected more sensations from her dream meeting with Godric, I had hoped for a deeper connection, something even more earth shattering than the dream itself, but your descriptions didn’t transport me to that atmosphere.
By the way, the caps lock was annoying as fuck, so please refrain from using them.
Your OC sounds like a teenager, dramatic, exaggerated and immature. Hopefully, she’ll be better than Sookie or any hormone driven girl with no brains and self preservation.

this is fucking epic
I'm so freaking happy that you updated like OHMYGOD!YES!
she's so badass and i love her with godric
i hope eric will speak to her
and that she'll learn about the soul mate thing soon
please please please update soon
this story is life

Kill Sookie. I never liked her but now she definitely has to die. I’m so mad right now. I was so ready for some smexy time and she screws it up like she screws up literally everything else with her annoying nature and mere presence. (Btw I love this story so much, so much)

I’m super glad you updated and can’t wait to see ehat happens next!

nice lol I love that last sentence, 'Im sorry I didn't get to enjoy you some more'. I would of loved to see his reaction to that. anyway I absolutely adore this story and I really cant wait to read the next chapter. Im looking forward to reading what happens next

Have I mentioned how much I love this story? Because I do!

Why the fuuuck did Sookie ruin a great moment!? I love those types of scenes where guys cuddle on top of the girl, it’s so precious and just makes me feel! I loved it. And I’m glad to see chapter 5, it was beautiful...until Sookie cock blocked Godric and Lindsey, effing rude! I’m excited for the next update!

Oh Christ! That was not pretty. What a night for Lindsey.

Oh balls! She’s in trouble.

Holy balls, that was hot. Phew!