| Reviews for Harry and the apocalypse |
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   Sakura Lisel chapter 8 . 2/1 I have a question. Why would the military have to physically search them for BITE marks? It should be obvious without physically searching them if they were bit or not. *lol* if their clothes aren't ripped and BLOOD soaked anywhere, or even LOOKS like its wet, or even DRIPPING blood everywhere from whatever 'hidden' bite wounds, or any other blood producing wounds, that they MIGHT have, then obviously they are NOT bitten without having to do a body inspection of everybody |
| NinneL chapter 1 . 5/8/2018 There are so many things wrong with your Harry. It's like you don't know the character at all |
| Lucinda Silver chapter 1 . 5/6/2018 This story need to be thoroughly edited. It simply has too many grammatical errors for me to enjoy the story not only that, the group, in chapter two I believe, they reacted by laughing at the act of magic Harry had performed on Carol, when they had no idea that mago existe. Just letting ya know and all. Just need a beta abd this story is good to go. |
| Yaw613 chapter 15 . 4/12/2018 Please write the next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot. |
| Rainbow2007 chapter 2 . 10/29/2017 love it |
| SF32 chapter 2 . 10/5/2017 What's on Carol's face? Think it was the husband who was an ass in this story though. |
| ImaginativeFury chapter 14 . 8/24/2017 14 chapters and only 4,000 words What a disappointment this "story" is. |
| ImaginativeFury chapter 5 . 8/24/2017 Wall of text |
| ImaginativeFury chapter 4 . 8/24/2017 Separate conversations so we can read something that isnt a mess. |
| ImaginativeFury chapter 3 . 8/24/2017 This is a nightmare given life! Do you not know how to write except in huge unreadable blocks of text? |
| ImaginativeFury chapter 2 . 8/24/2017 Wall of Text syndrome |
| Agent X chapter 1 . 4/6/2016 Great but you're missing one crucial ingredient! ME! Muahhhh |
| Fruitpie21 chapter 9 . 4/7/2016 Carol lol |
| Fruitpie21 chapter 11 . 4/7/2016 Good start! Its funny they all just happened to be in England considering none of them knew eachother before the world went to shit. Its also funny Dale is plotting the murder of Shane keep it up! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 4/4/2016 If Carol is going to "plead her case", you should have probably had her use different language then " clowns", "motherfucked", and "scumbags". Especially when two of the " scumbag clowns " in question are Rick's wife and son. And Ed should be relieved his wife is dead, not best into sobs and need to be pistol whiped. I get this is supposed to be humor and most of this not to be taken seriously, but... I don't know. |
