I am shocked she could still go on when she had so many injuries also why has she not used her powers?
Btw don't want to ruin the fun but I would like to suggest to keep looking out for repeating words. "as" is like in every second sentence you use to describe something. :)

Awww they are really sweet together :) really can't imagine my eyes would give away how I feel... That could be very difficult life lol

It was great. Soft and spot on, not something that would just go too far. I like the way he sees it. But oh man, I would love to be carried to my bed by him hahaha. Anywayyyyyy... Bless her. Something like is really sad and upseting.. I would rather not sleep as well. Great story! :)

Oh yes I did enjoy it haha it was brilliant! Poor Erik! :D

Oh wow now that was interesting! Like the description, can't wait until they find her :) can't blame her, I would be freaked by the two of them watching me as well haha

Ooo going to Charles is interesting. I'm sad to be at the end of this story. You've not updated in a year so I won't be looking for a update such a shame though because I love this a lot. Thank you so much for writing this story.

I'm so surprised she's not had twins since they run in the family

Aw the ring, you know when she died in the other timeline did she have the ring on because after her death Charles would have ended up with it. And him carrying it round all them years is heartbreaking.

At the end that was Erik right

Aw that dream sharing from Charles was funny. I guess that means he still has feelings. I did love how they both cleared the air with that chat. It would be also interesting to see how she lost that first baby and their reactions too it.

It's not really a Au but it would be so cool to see Charles and Erik's reaction to her death in the other tineline. Maybe that's why they have that freud when they're older because they blame themselves for her death. But that's assuming she doesn't die in the new timeline

Laurien was so cute with Charles in this chapter

Had to laugh when peter called his basically stepmum gorgeous.

"You either end up brokem hearted or with a bullet in your head" I really hope that isn't foreshadowing.

Was Charles with Sera before? If so that's weird being with the auntie and the niece.

Would be cool after this story if you did some Au's like what if Laurien never lost her and Charles child. Like how would have it panned out after they broke up co-parent? Or did she leave with the kid. Would be quite interesting.

Must be awkward for Peter seeing his dad kiss someone else

Madame Girard sounds like a Karen...

I swear everytime I can't find any new good fanfiction I always come back here abd rereadm