you need a spelling and grammer check.

Wow, i cannot say it was absolutely perfect, but it is pretty good. I hope to see an update soon.

oh nooo to much questions where's Slade, the titans are coming or not, Jinx is going to be his girlfriend Ahhhhhhhh my brain is going to explode! Anyway can't wait until the next chapter! Second Beware *dramatic music* what's going to happen?

Oh no why should we beware! uh just kidding. Your story is awesome (don't ask me about spelling or grammar seriously I am way worse than you XD) I want to cry hell I going to San Francisco to find that little necklace so I can go in Jump City *dreamy sigh* I hope you will continue this super duper amazing fantastic story! Ssj Maggie

That was interesting but you had a lot of wrong words or words spelled wrong. There's no english word "wich". It's "which". And it's not "bei"; it's "by". And it's not "wisch"; it's "wish".

Now, to be fair to you, I would have made *many* more errors than that if I had tried to write in my best foreign language, french.