| Reviews for False Smiles |
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tetra3 chapter 1 . 1/8/2016 Huh; this is a bit of an intriguing take on Joy. The style this was written in itself was pretty interesting, and when I read it through the second time I actually fully realised how much this naturally fit Joy's point of view and own thoughts. This was pretty well executed, and I did find this to be quite enjoyable to read. The main idea was brought out very smoothly, and I found certain moments to be actually really touching(the reveal and group hug was great). Awesome job with this! |
VenusWolf34 chapter 1 . 12/11/2015 Beautiful job. So much emotion great job |
The Infamous Fly chapter 1 . 9/6/2015 Nice concept, I like it. |
hamadabrosrule chapter 1 . 9/4/2015 All this time Joy has been living in deppression? Okay…you know what, I think Sadness is already pressing my brain console…oh great, 3…2…wait, it didn't reach number 1 yet— WAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHAAAAAAHHHAAAAAAHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH…! |
KQSimply chapter 1 . 8/27/2015 This was so lovely. I love the staccato rhythm this style winds up achieving, putting you right inside of Joy's head and thought process. And there were just so many sweet little moments. Heart fluttered a little when Anger hugged her. Nice to see Anger represented as someone other than a d*ckhead, haha. :'3 Well done, I really enjoyed this. |
Beep's B chapter 1 . 8/26/2015 :) |
Grover Puddle chapter 1 . 8/26/2015 Love it. Love the idea of Joy taking dopamine. Raises all sorts of questions. |
hiddeninthelibrary chapter 1 . 8/26/2015 That was downright beautiful. |
Elcee the Porcupine chapter 1 . 8/25/2015 Wow. This writing style is particularly interesting, because it makes me wonder if this is what Joy's train of thought actually works: quick, simple, and spontaneous. The fast paced tone gives it a lot of energy proportionate to Joy's character, and even the sad moments seem to work in its favor. It's almost poetic, even. |
Niker chapter 1 . 8/25/2015 Wow. This is some pretty powerful stuff. I like how you worded the whole thing. It was a little confusing sometimes who was speaking and acting. |
the indecisive bird chapter 1 . 8/25/2015 I loved the story shown in this.. Simple? Complex? Writing style. It was unique. And it's just one of those stories where I clap in the end. *round of applause* Bravo. Excellent work! ~Afiction |
Delgataz chapter 1 . 8/25/2015 This is so simple yet so very defined, I love this! |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/25/2015 good story, i will continue to read but slowly i kind of dont like the short sentances |
Elemental-756 chapter 1 . 8/25/2015 You made me cry. |
Nairobi-Harper chapter 1 . 8/25/2015 I like the idea. Wonderful one shot! |