(Oops, accidentally hit 'post' too soon, so have to complete my review here.)
Wow, that was pretty amazing! I haven't read any Raditz's centric stories before and this definitely did not disappoint as a first time. This story had me hooked right from the start, which means the writing was pretty good, the premise was intriguing and characterization was good enough to not put me off.
It was a little confusing at first being dropped into hell with Vegeta dead and not knowing why or how, but I totally dig Raditz's role here.
Missing punctuation or italics to indicate Raditz's thought led to a bit of confusion at first. Could have done with extra space between paragraphs where there were scene changes or POV changes. Other than couple other things I loved this story, the idea, your portrayal of Raditz. Loved the ending but I was hoping to find out what happened to Vegeta. Hopefully the sequel takes care of that.

Wow!

I really like all your stories from welcome to hell son, and Why? I even read why me? To discern why the start of this fic has Vegeta dead. But I found nothing. So why is Vegeta dead?

I remember first reading this when I was like, nine or ten years old. I’m so happy I found it again~

goden tree frogs

Love it

great start

Wow, excellent work! Truly a remarkable story, I'm reading all your stories right now!

I first ran across this fic YEARS ago on another site. Temple of Trunks, maybe? And I loved it. I'm a sucker for mythology and fairy tales and your work just sang to my soul. I just want you to know how much I love reading your work again and again. It is epic. 3

That ending is fabulous! Lol! Poor evil sorcerer... He's got all the bad luck. Dealing with Vegeta in the afterlife must be an FML or in this case FMAL moment.

Awesome story! I'm a Raditz fan too whoop!

I remember reading this story over 10 years ago now. it was fantastic then its fantastic now. I honestly think would be awesome if you started waiting for DBZ again. I would have to say it would be awesome to see you tie the new movies together in your universe.

I've watched enough supernatural to know where this is going...

This is really good, the characters are spot on. However I feel you might be going a bit overboard with spiritual stuff. Dragon Ball has always been about a person, their power, and how people have the potential for anything. Demons usually don't appear in the living world of Dragonball unless something major is going down. That being said I look forward to reading the rest!

holy fuck im speechless it was perfect