Umm ... plx continue?

Arghh... the waited abrupt ending! :( Well, I must say I did quite enjoy the two chapters here. For what it's worth, I think you did great with Jodie's PoV. If you ever get the chance to come back to this story, I would love to see more interactions between Root and Ai. Loved the fave pinching. Our beloved Jodie might just turn out to be quite the rival for Nakamori-keibu :D

An interesting start. I've gotta be honest, I've been wanting to read this certain fanfic for awhile (even if I know I'm going to feel some disappointment when I get to the last chapter... you know, with it seemingly not being updated and all), but I've been trying my best to hold off until I finish Person of Interest just in case this story gives any spoilers.

I'm holding off anymore, though. You've hooked me with this chapter and I'm reading on :)

Sincerely,
Cyres