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bluffsummer81 chapter 4 . 3/21 Please continue this |
jabarber69 chapter 4 . 7/20/2018 Hey this is one hell of a great story...so where is the next chapter!? P.S. i figure the dragon is harry potter in his animagus |
Jimbocous chapter 4 . 3/28/2018 lol |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/18/2018 The dragon is harry animagus form right? |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/30/2017 Please come back to this |
Black Lican chapter 3 . 5/27/2017 Are you going to continue this story because it is a nice to read |
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 1 . 1/21/2016 Extremely annoying chapter. Even canon was not this bad after Voldemort was defeated. |
Da Zhang chapter 4 . 12/31/2015 So, updating sounds like a really good idea, just saying |
ed-hunter616 chapter 4 . 12/27/2015 Interesting story. Hope your not going to leave us hanging here.. ;) |
anonyboss chapter 4 . 10/8/2015 please write more |
PaC chapter 1 . 10/3/2015 Draco is "elevated to his Lordship". NOTHING about Lucius DYING, or WHEN, if Lucius is dead in weeks or months after Daphne's father is killed or murdered or whatever. Just in the next chapter, it is briefly mentioned, that Lucius is dead. Considering the Malfoy plan was to get the Greengrass wealth. This seems important. That Daphne wasn't worried about being murdered and wasn't working on killing off the Malfoys, I found odd. Just playing "ice queen", even with NO more marital relations, would I'd think, be too much, living, being tied to the ferret. LOL she defends her sister being called a "bint" in the next chapter. Considering the MORON is a Draco admirer, I'd think no matter if she still loves her sister or not, she sure in hell would think of many worse names than "bint" that fit her sister. Then again, maybe it's ANY excuse to have a reason to attack Draco. IMO, assuming Draco soon dies. I would find it "better" if at least, Daphne had "plans" to kill off the Malfoys, regardless of her idiot sister being upset and a bawling "widow" and all that. PERHAPS the Greengrass vault access deal, is what helped to keep the Malfoys from killing Daphne off. Although amusing, it is a bit "comedy", Daphne riding roughshod over Draco, intimidating him, attacking him.. Unless THAT strapped for cash, you'd THINK that Draco and his daddy, would have arranged for THUG help, to "put Daphne in her place". Funny, yes, but very believable, Daphne beating up Draco often, cursing him, kneeing him in the family "jewels", NOT very believable for drama, only for humor, comedy, crack, parody. Draco taking the "lordship", FYI, I read a review or author profile or something once, saying the entire "lord" shit of fanfics, is very lame on many levels. ONE IS, that LORD is a generic term, a shorthand for longer and more specific titles, baron of this or that, earl of this or that, and many other "lord" sort of titles. Right or wrong, I never looked it up, just passing it along, right or wrong, valid or not. I'm fairly ignorant of it, but if you are not following. Imagine if Draco is in the military, and he is promoted to "officer". Officer being like "lord", and you'd NOT say that, but that he became a lieutenant, or a captain, or corporal, a certain TYPE of officer, that he didn't get promoted to his new rank, of "officer". LORDS are pretty much a muggle sort of thing, and I'd gather a lot of thought needed to try to incorporate that, pound the square muggle block into the wizarding world round hole. |
Hoppy159 chapter 4 . 9/14/2015 I like the story. I liked how Malfoy and his male friends got what they deserved. I liked how at the beginning Harry was smart and got a tiny bit of justice by outsmarting his enemies. The last two chapters are hot. Chapters are a bit short, but they are effective at setting up cliffhangers for the next one. Was a little disappointed you don't seem to be getting a lot of reviews. Wondering if the dragon is somehow Harry, as he's a bit OOC. Also wondering how Harry gets tied into Daphne's tale. Looking forward to updates, thanks! |
He-With-Many-Hyphens chapter 4 . 9/13/2015 Curse you and your entirely unsuiprising cliffhanger. Its coming (hehehe puns) along nicely, although i do wish the chapters were longer, but i do understand the necessity for shorter chapters in order to meet a weekly deadline on top of all the other shit life makes you deal with. Ugh. Update soon |
Rampaging crabs chapter 4 . 9/13/2015 So when is harry going to come into the story because it's looking like the dragon is not harry and I lost interest with the OC dragon. |
AbaddontheDevourer chapter 4 . 9/13/2015 Thank you very much for the chapter. Can't wait until the next edition. Will this be a pornpros without plot or do you have something planned plotwise? |