better yet I hope it never finish stupid story that has lily and james hate thier son and be slaves to dumbledore and lily not wanting kids

good thing in my story the potters and longbottoms will be immune to potions and spells and dark spells and they will mprotect the wesleys from that old fool

another abonded story

wow I never knew the actor who played mr wesley was in 101 dalmatians he was one of de vil henchman

wow in my story it will be worse for dumbledore lily and james will live and they know the future and what he was planning

please update.

please update when you can.

I think this is a really good story and I really am enjoying it. I like the way that this has been done. Hopefully the next chapter is out soon.

That's a lot of tears. Mac is spending some serious money.

I am so confused by the pacing of this story Harry Potter 8 years old kids taking the Gringotts and healed by the way sorry for potential spoilers gains a bunch of Lordships and Powers then skip straight to going to ollivanders and implementing a memory into Ollivander about choosing a wand still 8 years old by the way so he's not able to perform the mind Arts which is a Beyond newt level? also no introduction to who the hell these people are that are helping Harry in the first place all in all a very confusing first chapter and a real turn-off to reading any more of it

What is this? The flow and dialogue is all wrong.

Well written.

I was wondering if Hermonie was even in this story.

That was a great prank pulled on Ron and he got Harry to have Neville has his room mate. Ernie will have to deal with the snoring. I think Harry and Draco should be friends has Dumbledore has not right to tell him to not be friends with the boy.

One question how is Luna in Harry year.