Reviews for Not Broken |
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Johnathan De-ath chapter 1 . 10/6/2015 HI just stab me please this story was too cute and it made me extremely happy. Loved how you wrote. You wrote Mordin perfect. |
theonlineidofme chapter 1 . 8/24/2015 That was beautiful. I love asexual Shepard, but Mordin was simply amazing! Of course he'd understand. Again, very beautiful and wonderful story. |
GoldFlareon chapter 1 . 8/23/2015 This was very well written, even if most of the dialogue was directly from the game. I think that bringing light to an asexual character, Shepard or not, is fantastic. There's not enough representation in the media, I feel. In fact, it's basically nonexistent. From what I've seen, anyway. I think that some of the words in the fourth-last paragraph don't need to be italicised because they would still hold meaning without being emphasised, but that's personal preference. I would like to have seen this story continue for longer, as it was very short, but I suppose your intention was to have it short and sweet. :] Still, conversations with Mordin are always fun to read. Well written! :] |
vampirecheetah chapter 1 . 8/23/2015 glad to see asexual!shepard getting some appreciation |
CJ-T-Bone chapter 1 . 8/23/2015 Would you believe me if I told I am asexual as well, nice to know Shepard shares in my pain. Nice little ficlet, rather cute. :) |