Interesting take, the campaign formatting can be done well but in this case is kinda making the chapters a little small for my tastes. I never really got into RWBY so it’s not quite my taste but it would hold my attention if you come back to it

I like this a lot!

Thinking one of the Asiatic girls hangs a handle onto "Yang"?

Taylor x Emma!

Awesome

Nice story, are you still continuing it on fanfic or Spacebattles?

Keep up the good work

Quite for a nazi to get a painful beatdown.

Going a bit overboard in the number of RWBY charictures showing up.

A wild roleplayer has appeared!

Dice rolling is an interesting story-guiding tool.

I was listening to rwby soundtrack and i burnpoped up love this one nice

What was her trigger event? Emma never met Sophia apparently…was Emma raped or injured? Half explained.

…it is so weird with Vicky and Amy being reversed.

"It was a headbutt! I couldn't get my hands free!"
Who did she head butt? answered

So Vicky is flashing people? her costume has not bottoms.

Why is her cape name Summer Rose instead of Ruby Rose

I find it humorous that Emma is Weiss and Taylor is Yang given their body types. Ah, she is Blake

Yay! A good bit of action! At least this Taylor still has a grasp of team tactics. Even if she's a lot more of an aggro tank. Now to see how she does against Hookwolf. Thanks for the chapter!

very good work