A great story indeed! Others may say that Soma does seem OOC, but I think that it's in a good way? The GE story line was pretty fast paced and one wouldn't be able to divulge deeper into how each character would develop. Hoping for a next chapter.

PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY! I'm very curious of what happens next!

PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZ SUCH A GREAT ARE YOUUUUUUUUUU!

Soma... ...loves is the best god eater fanfic EVER

Omg This is THE BEST God eater fan fiction THEY KISSED.a this story has just filled me with sooo much emotion I can't even explain UPDATE!I will hunt you down if I have to

This is a pretty awesome story! I can't wait to see what happens next between Soma and Riitsu! My new favorite OTP!

Wow. This is amazing. I really want an update.

Ow Gawd! I love this! Please update!

Hands down, Author-san! Your fanfic is so good! I'm fangirling so hard right now. The way you depict the (fluffy/romantic) scenes, especially the last part where Soma kiss Riitsu, are just so urrggh! It's just so right. It's not overly cheesy that it will make you cringe. I hope you didn't abandon this piece of art and please update soon. I'm really excited what will happen next. And your writing is also good. Keep up the good work!

FR! Where did he learn to do that?!

This chapter was AMAZING! MY FACE WAS ON FIRE!

UPDATE THIS PLEASE!

I want more moments like this!

Well, wait till the English version that will come to vita and ps4. Then maybe we can see more people coming in God eater fanfic.

UPDATEEE! Btw u gotta read this god eater fix that's just as good as urs that's also a OC X Soma doc. It follows the game plot it's called Learning to Speak.

Excuse me if im wrong but alisa is a blade user and not a short sword one ... if my memory is right i guess

CONTINUE THIS! It's great!

Really awesome story! I like it