I've read this fanfic so many times and finally listened to you by switchfoot and it's an amazing song so Carmen and Shane love the melody .. your writing is amazing the angst the pain the feels the love

Only just found this fanfic and I love it ... I really love the caring side of Shane and I love Carmen and Shane together ... please write more of this fics

This story, this fan fiction was soooooooo...good. I mean it. I mean I have a hard time reading through drama, sad parts, fights in many a fan fiction. I find it even harder to write them in my own (knowing that I need to in order to keep the stories real enough & all...) But reading it here, it all just made since. Well done.

I will say that even with all of the grammar & a few spelling errors (not much in spelling the words, but not the correct spelling for some of the words you were trying to use) this is still the best Sharmen story/fan fiction I have ever read hands down. Keep up the good work.

Here's the thing about this particular chapter. I must admit that the title alone scared the living $H! out of me because in the earlier one Dana drunkenly mentions Shane sleeping with Alice. I honestly thought for a second that this chapter was going there. Thank God it didn't & so far I'm still hooked on reading more of this fan fiction. Good work so far.

I love this story I'm just confused on how Shane got sick?