I found myself to be rather skeptical of this pairing, but it certainly grew on me over time.
I did enjoy this story and I hope that at some point in the future, it will be updated and finished.
But aside from some trivial critiques, this story definitely has its charm, humor, and cute factor to it.
But yeah, I hope this can get a proper ending some day

First off Tails does not swear or cuss or use foul language! I am really disappointed about this!

I've loved this story for so long, so hopefully Chapter 3 comes out. I bet college is grueling work! I hope you return soon and write a Chapter 3. It's a great story.

I would gladly read any future installments of this story. However I can see that it has been 2 years since your last update. While normally I would urge you to continue I have no knowledge of your situation and therefore will simply say that your story is magnificent and that if you ever get the time you should consider updating.

I'm quite curious as to why this was never finished. It's a wonderful story and, if you ask me, a wonderful story deserves to be a finished book.

I am thoroughly impressed with what you have done with this story; it has been some time since I have come across a good Tails and Sally romance, and I look forward to the time that your next chapter is published.

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Are there going to be more chapters? This is a pairing I'd never really considered, but I find it to be quite excellent.

Her willakers, I sure would like a new chapter!

This is one of the best Tails-related stories on FF. Both Tails and Sally are perfectly in character and all the chapters are very well written. Keep up the great work!

Hey, its been a while. Are you in a writer's block? Don't meen to sound pushy, I want to know what happens next.

Sir, for writing a story about my all time favorite Sonic the Hedgehog pairing you automatically get a review from me, something I reserve for my favorite stories and authors.

So far the story is very well written and believable with all the characters acting mostly in character. Even Sally's foul language is believable as she is older and (justifiably) pissed off.

My only complaint so far is some of the phrases you use to describe Tails. In the first section of this chapter you call him an avian and a bird he is not, you may have been looking for the word aviator. You also referred to him as a lupe towards the end of the same section, and to the best of my knowledge that is not a word ever used to describe a fox. The most common word for that would be vulpine.

Other than those two minor gripes you are doing a great job with this story and am looking forward to seeing more from you!

Finally, someone else who's giving this a shot!

I'm very much liking this so far. Good pacing and dialogue. I do agree that the whole Sonic being a horn-dog thing seems a little OOC, but it's a very small thing as Sally's and Tails' interaction is the highlight. You left me some very kind and amazing reviews, so I had to return the favor, which I would have done regardless because this has been very good! Please continue! I'm very eager to see how someone else handles these two :)

Its actually a good thing that you didn't add the nightmare part. That would have killed the flow of the story.

Not a bad story. I've read the concept before, of course, but you are taking things slowly, which is important when you're dealing with feelings.

I, for one, can believe Sonic would do that. He's the embodiment of freedom and that's not always a good thing.

One thing I found a bit weird was that Tails is living in an apartment. I'd expect a secluded workshop/house. With his speed he could zip back to civilization in minutes, while living as a hermit when he wants to.

What I liked the most was the gradual development of the Tails/Sally friendship.

Good job out there!

Very cute story so far. Your character interaction is very natural and engaging and I think you've really nailed Tails and Sally's personalities well. The one criticism I have is I thought it was a little OOC for Sonic to suggest a three-way with Sally. I get you're trying to show that he's impulsive and pig-headed, but I had a bit of a hard time accepting he'd be that much of a horn-dog to suggest such a thing. Other than that, I really like where you're going with this and look forward to future chapters.