This chapter broke me. I love how close all three of them have become. As much as Killian loves and wants Emma in his life Ellie does too and that's adorable.

The angst is almost unbearable sometimes but the healing and dealing is the best part of this fic. The characters are so raw and real. No matter how rough it gets i'll never tire of seeing them work through their issues.

Holy crap that line about him not being sure how many times he can cut himself open so she's not afraid to bleed FUCKS ME UP

Alhdlakss this is so soft and sweet and full of feelings

Gosh this fic is so full of feelings. My heart is full from watching Emma fall in love with Ellie nevermind all the feelings from Killian's romantic gestures.

Aldhsldjjdd I love this fic so much! I love the depth that you gave Anna. Her relationship with Killian is the most realistic thing about this story and their conflict always does things to my heart. Also your ability to write a little girl who is cute but an actual child - bubbly and cranky by turns - is amazing! I can't wait to reread this story for the dozenth time.

I know its probably unlikely after 3 years, but please please finish this story! I need to know what's wrong with their baby, i need to know if/how they get married, i need to know if Anna and Killian have the talk they so desperately need, i need to know the name of the baby and what middle name Elsa decides on. I need all of this and so much more. So please please take pity on me, and the load of others who i know are also waiting for these answers, and update!

I still miss this story & would love to see it finished some day. It's one of the most beautifully written Emma & Killian stories I've ever read.

Such an amazing story and I cannot wait to see what happens next! I hope the baby is okay!

You know, I always convince myself I can handle an unfinished story. I can handle the emotional investment and inevitable shattering.

I'm such a liar.

You write grief in a way that I have never experienced this poignantly in any outernet or fanfic work. I pride myself on my ability to not cry at raw emotion... please know I have cried at least once a chapter for the last 3 chapters.

I don't know when I started reading this one... I feel like I've always had it in my life, but now I'm not ready to let it go. No pun intended; I'm just upset. I know from personal experience how hard it is to keep up with a fic... I have a piece I haven't updated since Halloween 2017... it's a little different than 2016, but... I hope this fic is eating at your brain the way mine is for me. I hope we'll get to find out if Baby Swan-Jones is going to be a premie or just a moment of terrifying reality...

Now if you'll excuse me, I have to go stare in agonizing emptiness at a wall for a few hours.

Please please please please update

This is such a great story, I hope you finish it at some point!

I read this story whenever I feel low, not always the best idea because it gets pretty sad but the happy moments make me so cheerful it's worth it. I know this hasn't been updated in forever, and I know it probably never will be again, but know that there's someone who thinks your writing is outstanding and who loves your characters with her whole heart. Thank you for this story, unexpectedly unfinished

I reread this story every few months! I hope one day we'll get an ending! It's such a wonderful story! Thank you!

Please come back to this. It is a wonderful story and you have taken such care with it for so long. We know life happens, but finishing this would be welcome.