| Reviews for Afterglow |
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   Minnie1015 chapter 1 . 5/18 Wow...I’ve never seen such hateful comments. I haven’t read this story yet (starting it now), but you are an amazing author. I just read all your other TMNT stories. Please don’t listen to a word that these trolls are saying. I know you’re not writing TMNT anymore (didn’t check your other stories to see if you’re writing at all), but just know that even years later readers are enjoying your stories. Thanks for sharing them with us! |
| cjcnxjsnsmx chapter 37 . 3/25/2019 我严重怀疑RKM女士在写这章是时是把自己带入进去了，龟圈第一少妇石锤了 |
| DNruronr chapter 1 . 3/24/2019 Raphril is a SUCK YOU ARE NOTHING BUT A SLUT |
| DitzGalReady chapter 42 . 2/22/2019 OH MY GOSH! I LOOOOVE THIS STORY! [im 11 is it bad i read all 42 chapters w/ no heasitation?] XD Well, this is different from most stuff i read, but its AMAIZING! I'm flabbergasted[lol] by how much this story ROCKS! 10000000000000 STARS! It's funny, awsome, and innopropreat[cant spell sorryyyy] THREE THINGS I LOVE IN STORIES! -sigh- i wish there were more stories like THIS. you did an incredible job on this. I apolagize for the spelling errors i made. PEACE OUT MOTHAH TRUCKAHZ XD! |
| xxRenetxx chapter 1 . 5/18/2018 cANshiTT |
| xxRenetxx chapter 1 . 5/18/2018 call the fuckers below me just shut the fuck up why u gotta comment shit like that, if u don like the author go home sis u doing too much hoe |
| sgdgdndyeh chapter 1 . 3/12/2018 Information of the writer of this fiction Name: Raichel Martineiz Age:24 Comes from:Orlando,U.S Likes:Cocks,Making love with her Russian boyfriend (Starrdusty),being licked by her littte pet Vanessa Hobby:BJ, Imegine herself as April O'neil or Ash to fuck with Raphael Hamato and Johnny |
| wxftexsdf chapter 2 . 3/4/2018 You always a jerk since you ship Zutara |
| wxftexsdf chapter 1 . 3/4/2018 Afterglow: A awful story about the worst couple of tmnt2012 which shows the readers how eager the writer want to fuck with the fictional male character she adores as what she did in other fandom. |
| wxftexsdf chapter 1 . 3/4/2018 Wow Rach! I didn't know you are so dying for having sex with Mr. Raphael Hamato. Do not worry, beauty. I will let you got what you dying for in my fiction for you. |
| flaccolover chapter 42 . 1/12/2018 More chapters. |
| sgdgdndyeh chapter 37 . 12/15/2017 Oh damn, this chapter... Well, at first I have to say like what as your “FANS” said that that was so freakin' hot and your writing skill is SO amazing. But beside it, I found something interesting. Do you want to know? In fact, this chapter, ah, sorry actually is this fanfiction is full of HUGE OOC of Raph and April especially this NSFW chapter and Ch.34. Alright, I guess some of your fans saw this point will come to argue with me, but that is THE TRUTH. Did you remember the details in this chapter when Raph opened the door and April just lying in the bed, showing her vagina to him that she can seduce him（I have seen that fanarts you made somewhere） and Raph gonna give April a “punishment” but April begged him to fuck her and saying “I need you, I NEED you”? So what did she do? how did she say it? In an eager but lustful way like a slut! Well tbh, these parts are SO AWFUL that it cause me think that is NOT April O'Neil we know but a bitch original character who has same appearance and name as her who you created to ship with Raphael by accident. Remember what is your view on 2012 April? You said that she is the 3rd you favorite cartoon character, but is that true?Heh. I've heard some Raphril fans said that “Ap**t*llo is so awful”, as a hater of that, I agree, but for some fans I think Raphril is worse than that. |
| Guest chapter 42 . 8/15/2017 Plis continue! |
| Thurmastat chapter 42 . 8/16/2017 Love this story |
| T.v. gurl chapter 42 . 5/10/2017 More chapters soon |
