This story seems to have gotten a few details right and several wrong. I originally liked the story but now it feels so tasteless. p.s Captain America was never part of the Avengers and your Anti Christian views are well noted.

Great and interesting stoey

Well, while I am sad for Cidny's death, I will say this chapter (like the rest) was enjoyable!

well I really like this story but this just insults my religion so

very sad Cindy died... imagine the position

Man it's starting to get ridiculous...at least then Alpha female is not Mary Jane

I sure hope someone picks up that phone cause I FUCKIN CALLED IT! I KNEW it was Galacta! And you brought her in with the baby! I’m surprised you didn’t have her listing off everyone’s nutritional worth though.

Dear God. Poor DP.

Shame. I wanted Silk to survive. Oh poo.

Poor Cindy.
And Ben getting the action on. Rawr.
I hope you decide to update this some time.

Okay. I've spent a few hours reading this. I must say I enjoy this A LOT.
A shame there is only 9 chapters.

So good a goofy. But so far you haven't actually written in any explicit "smexy" scenes yet...

I was kinda hoping that it was Angelica as Firestar...but this is okay.

...Well Cosmic Entities like Galactus and "Galacta" can't get pregnant by our normal means. I know...I know.

I've read those comics. And apparently Galacta isn't actually canon. It would have been fun if she were, though.

noice.

Magnificent chapter can’t wait for more please update soon.

Why was this canceled?