Oh my, I really thought that they were transported to a parallel world which Shibuya is destroyed or the memories of Joshua’s game a long long time ago before he become the composer and put his best effort to change it and then watch over it till the game(i meant the actual game for ds/phone) begins.

Really enjoyed it and can’t wait for you to update!

So I’m beyond hooked. Holy crap this is amazing and the characters are beautifully written to a t and I can’t wait for more

Okay, I’m in love with this fic! A plus idea, A Plus execution. Like first of all there’s just the position this puts Joshua in; all he cares about was being right and winning his game so he can destroy Shibuya and himself, and he hadn’t even decided to spare Neku yet and now here he is, forced to actually GENUINELY work with him and the others and actually experience what he put Neku through, as in having to survive something way out of his depth - probably something he’s NEVER had to do before (if I’m interpreting correctly, that he shot himself in the mouth and played the Game on purpose.) Interesting how he’s choosing to keep fighting now that his possible erasure wouldn’t be on his terms.

And the world you’ve built around this is interesting; clearly it’s some corrupted manifestation of Joshua’s own psyche or a corrupted Shibuya intertwined with Joshua’s mind or something and it’s really cool.

And the way you portray the characters is great; you do a great job of capturing Neku’s mentality from that third week where he was sure Hanekoma was behind everything and so of course he just assumes this weird stuff is just another part of the game and he just has to solve the puzzle and find the next enemy.

And the emotion. The prologue with Sanae and Hanekoma hurt my heart. And even the brief stuff that we already saw in the game, Beat’s reunion with pin-Rhyme, like I already knew that scene but it still nearly made me cry to read it here.

Oh yeah and that “We was never in Kansas to begin with” exchange was perfect.

I really loved this; can’t wait to read more.

Wow I have to say I’m loving this fic. I love horror anf I love TWEWY so I say please do continue this.

P. S: and do ignore the weird reviewer with the bible whatever. I’m christian myself and nothing like that bullshit about not writing fanfiction ever comes up in any scriptures of any mass or whatever. That’s a load of crap.

Oh, this fic is good, I'm loving it so far! I just reread it now, and I can still feel the dread from that last sentence. It's wonderfully written, and I'm dying to find out what happens!

This story is fantastic so far! It's intense, intriguing, and suspenseful, traits which are all aided by beautifully descriptive writing. I simply can't wait for upcoming chapters to figure out more of the story :)

This story is very interesting so far! I love how descriptive your writing is. I'm excited to read what happens next. _

YEEESSS! So much suspense; I love it XD.

I'm getting so many chills because I know (or at least it seems) that for once, Josh doesn't have any control. ( o A o )

That. Was. Amazing! Can't wait for the next update!

WHAT. Holy cow next chapter please!