Simply lovely

Oh my goodness. I have no idea how I missed this brilliant story! You get Phryne perfectly!

Oh, I loved this! Please, please write more. I just love the way you express the different roles Phryne plays, and the way her evenings in the parlour with Jack are the 'real' her.

I liked the Phryne POV in this story. I also liked that you made this a complete story in itself. The references to the tendrils of KMC were appropriate, but that story didn't need to be known to get this one. The personal risks both Phryne and Jack took were nicely aligned with their characters. Their romantic leaps were realistic and sweet/hot. Nice work! Are you going to try writing other characters insights or observations? Like Hugh emulating Jack or Dot wanting to add a little Miss Fisher to herself? Mac certainly has a bead on the situation! The others surely have their own POV's and perhaps memories. I look forward to reading more of your work.

I love what you've done here. He so gets it! Thankyou for sharing.

Very good! Nice extension of a scene left open in the series. Looking forward to reading more from you.

Tack för dina fina ord. Jag njöt verkligen din berättelse, men det vet du!

Lovely story...