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goldshqipe chapter 6 . 10/9 Feed me mooooreee These are pretty good chapters and I like that it isn't even following Canon, though I do hope Naruto joins the angels side or he goes on his own to find his path but we'll see whatll happen (hopefully this won't turn into a harem) Hope you update soon, stay safe |
PossibleSpoiler chapter 1 . 6/10 I dont have an account and I’m not Bashing the story but the pacing is way to fast, your just bouncing from one thing to the next with no time for ppl understand what the hell is going on, which also messes with the flow of the story so it feels likes you just mashed it together. You need more exposition and I’m not sure if English is not your 1st language or if your just young but there are a lot of errors. If you don’t have a beta I’d ask around. On the upside I love the fact that you worked in the Lucifer series into the story and I do love the concept of the story I like what I have read so far it if you could fix the issues I have mentioned it could be so much greater, it has great promise. I am just speaking my mind, feel free disregard what I have mentioned, Just my my 2 cents. |
sniperbro1998 chapter 6 . 6/8 I hope Naruto regains his memories and kills Lucifer i don't think Naruto should join Lucifer. Lucifer is a hypocrite who is annoying always thinking he is right he doesn't deserve Naruto i think it would be great if Naruto kills Marikeez as revenge against Lucifer. |
wolveseclipse0033 chapter 1 . 5/31 correction to anybody who claims that liking koneko is pedophilia ... it is not if the characters is between the ages of 15 and 17 ... get yall fact striaght |
Issei ODR chapter 2 . 5/27 Sus poderes relacionados con la energía Sagrada fueron de grados , es igual como su poder de luz. Aún puede ser efectivo contra los demonios pero no sería lo mismo que un ángel dispara una lanza de luz a un demonio y lo mata de un tiro. |
LilHuesos chapter 1 . 5/22 in my humble opinion it looked good until it is a NarutoxKoneko, I'm sorry I don't like pedophilia |
RandoFox chapter 1 . 5/22 Can you go to your bio and change waisting to wasting, don't have to but I was just pointing out a spelling error. |
Carlosxvx chapter 6 . 5/22 This is in no way naruto, this is a pathetic OC with his name, i already reported this trash. |
Gwentor chapter 5 . 3/26 Story for pedophiles. Only pedophiles like Koneko. |
Guest chapter 5 . 9/16/2019 Pathetic author really pathetic |
MIKE202303 chapter 5 . 7/1/2019 Nice work |
Habu2010 chapter 5 . 6/24/2019 Please update |
NinjaFang1331 chapter 5 . 6/24/2019 See you next time |
IlluminHeaven chapter 5 . 6/24/2019 I can tell you why many want stronger to be stronger than you do. In his own story he is stronger than he is in your story. Simple. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2015 Naruto is acting pathetic and archangel to OOC |