Reviews for The Disappearance
Succi chapter 5 . 10/5/2015
My dear friend - yes you have read correctly - I pick my friends very carefully and who would be a better friend than someone knowing all about my favourite and not so favourite ACD stories? ;-)

As usual I love all the references in your story. And I also like that you included Janine/Sussex Downs. I totally agree, I don not think Sherlock would take advantage of her in that way - no matter what he has done to her.

Thank you sooo much! That's the way the Lion's Mane should have gone! It is so much better this way!

I am glad Sherlock finally said the words - really well done!

I look forward to your next weird Sherlolly story, although I do not find them so weird, after all. But maybe it is because I am weird... ;-)
shazzykins chapter 5 . 9/28/2015
Oh, hun. That was fantastic! Thank carrying on with it.
lilsherlockian1975 chapter 5 . 9/28/2015
THE most unique humor... It's so original and invoking! This was absolutely delightful! You are a dream! A breath of fresh air!

Thank you for this!
Succi chapter 4 . 9/22/2015
What can I say? I love your weirdness, really I do!
How dare Molly ignore Mr Rathbone on the TV? ;-)
Poor Molly - feeling so alone and being so afraid. So I was so glad when Sherlock arrived. The whole conversation was fantastic. Sherlock having it all planned out and telling her hot to proceed without ever realizing that he has forgotten the most important thing: to tell her how he feels about all of this, and most importantly about her.
I think it's so great hot you've included all those bits from the series (Mrs H's bins, the best man speech, ...) and my favourite sentence is: "You are my truth." Simply beautiful! The best way of using "when you have eliminated the impossible..." ever!
Oh, how I look forward to the next one! Now I can't help but think about what you might have put in there from our conversations. So, please update soon, my talented friend, for I am sure it will make me smile. It always does :-)
lilsherlockian1975 chapter 4 . 9/18/2015
Oh for the love of Pete! Well, let's begin.

His entrance... the 'nutters' conversations... the 'all of your crap has been moved to hang out with all of my crap!' The 'weed your garden!' His 'declaration' - Molly's reaction to... well, everything.

UTTER PERFECTION!

I tried to pick out a favorite moment, part, line... impossible! This update may have ended me! I laughed the entire time and the warm moments were beyond lovely!
shazzykins chapter 4 . 9/18/2015
That chapter was very emotional and atmospheric, excellent stuff. Thank you. :-)
Succi chapter 3 . 9/7/2015
That chapter was hilarious! I think you've decided Sherlock's behaviour so well - absolutely believable.
What about the song Sherlock is composing? Is it about Molly? I wonder...
Sherlock, go get the girl! I can hardly wait to read the next chapter!
Succi chapter 2 . 9/7/2015
Thank you so much for providing us with this wonderful flashback! The way you've describes Molly's feelings - wow! So emotional and tangible. I loved Sherlock's note in the morning. So Sherlock! And John is right: You need to talk to her! NOW!
Succi chapter 1 . 9/7/2015
Finally I found time to read this great story.
I do understand why you have doubts (I always have them when I write / post something), but they are absolutely unfounded.
As usual I love how your vast knowledge and love for the ACD canon shines through everything. It adds so much substance to your story - your reference to the Six Napoleons made me smile.

Oh, what a revelation in the end! I can't wait for chapter 2!
lilsherlockian1975 chapter 3 . 9/3/2015
Oh... My! What I wouldn't give to see the looks on the respective Holemses(hmmm, did I do that right? Who cares!) Faces!

Amazing John scene! Love getting to see him have one up one the boys for once!

This is delightful!
shazzykins chapter 3 . 9/3/2015
Bloody fine day, thanks, and a bloody fine chapter.
Excellent stuff, hun. Thank you. :-)
S xxx
applejacks0808 chapter 3 . 9/3/2015
Absolutely lovely my friend! I love that John finally got one over the Holmes brothers (especially Mycroft!)
Excited for the next part!
applejacks0808 chapter 2 . 8/24/2015
John is such a stand up guy! Can't wait for more! :)
shazzykins chapter 2 . 8/24/2015
Oh, I wonder what sherlock's reaction will be? Will he storm off to get Molly from major sholto's cottage?
Can't wait to find out.
Thanks for another great chapter.
S xxx
lilsherlockian1975 chapter 2 . 8/24/2015
No. You didn't disappoint! It was wonderful... 'Regards' yep... That's 100% Sherlock! It was lovely though my heart is breaking for Molly and I'm hoping for the best! Loving it!
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