Reviews for Point of Return
DricabannerOdinson chapter 1 . 4/21/2018
I love the chapter !
It would be so interesting to have a continuation, it would be incredible.
Diana Shaffer chapter 1 . 6/12/2017
wonderful!
skydancer2ooo chapter 1 . 10/2/2016
Nice, but why is Loki so weak in your story? Have you never read the comics Loki is relly powerful. Sur the movies make him look like a pushover but I hated that because I know how powerful he really is.
Brigadier7899 chapter 1 . 3/28/2016
I know what you mean; its like Loki was saying "free me, I dare you" at the same time as as he was saying "you'll regret doing so!" ,
Ruby of Raven chapter 1 . 2/20/2016
Ha! Sentiment! Foiled again! XD I loved it!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2015
Can you finish Pray for Rain and the other one with Thor's clone?
pietoraven36 chapter 1 . 10/2/2015
Hello! I enjoyed this story very much. One of my favorite parts is when you where like oh damn thor is coming. Perfect loki right there. A few criticisms although there aren't many is that Odin and Thor would most likely still be extremely angry that Loki escaped and would probably force him back to his cell. I also found it interesting that Frigga was so coddling, although we don't know much of her. I believe that Loki has amazing power. I think he can conjure on a lot of things and that he can basically do anything is he summons enough power, except you know like making things randomly appear out of thin air, but I think he can like heal simple wounds if he tried and a bunch of other stuff, but I agree it is very hard to know exactly. I also loved the length of the story and I hope you write more!
I think it stopped a little abruptly but that's okay and it's YOUR story not mime. I was hoping that maybe Frigga and Odin would have a quick arguement and Odin would like spit fire at loki before returning him to his cell. And it seemed like Jane was a little out of character but since she mortal ist truly hard to write her with the others.
Anyway great job, I think loki would be able to fight of anyone of the avengers is he wanted too because magic beats all and if the hulk tried to grab him, he teleports away. Haha great job, please write more
Pietoraven36
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2015
This is a great one-shot! I really had hoped that Loki had been let free in that part but it was probably his expression XD anyway are you going to update Pray for Rain or...
Guest chapter 1 . 9/22/2015
I enjoyed this different take on Dark World, where Loki helps to change things for the better. If you wanted to continue, there is still the problems of the Aether still in Jane and the imminent convergence to sort out. What will the dark elves do next? What will happen to Loki? Back to prison? Thanks for the story £££
anon chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
Very well done! You captured everyone in character and your writing is brilliant!:-) I really enjoyed it.
RoseRed chapter 1 . 8/21/2015
Frigga lives! THANK YOU!:) I love fics that let her live, especially when Loki has something to do with it! The ending was kinda rushed, but it wasn't too bad. It would be great if you wrote just one more chapter to tie things up a little better though. All in all a great story!:)

And you made a great point in your AN. I never really thought about that. He can hold his own in a fight with Thor, so I guess he is pretty physically fit. Kinda have to be to fight Thor.
Arianne1 chapter 1 . 8/21/2015
I really think you should continue with this-it seems unfinished, but it could really go places.
OfTheOcean chapter 1 . 8/21/2015
I think that Loki's pretty strong, after all, he can hold his own with Thor okay.
I am so happy that Frigga didn't die in this story. I cried so hard when she properly died in the film.
not-active.abandoned-account chapter 1 . 8/21/2015
YES. They nerfed his magic so much for the films. Still upset about that. Anyway, I really enjoyed this. Loki was spot on, haha XD Loved reading his thoughts. Frigga was badass. And oh, Loki and Frigga together break my heart T.T Loved it.
Nikki Pond chapter 1 . 8/20/2015
That was interesting AU.

Power? Well obviously Loki doesn't do magic blasts or something like that, despite the fanfictions. He uses magic for illusions, distractions and trickery. He does physical fight, but he wasn't much of a combat, especially hand-to-hand combat. He prefers to fight as long as he has weapon. But if he doesn't have one, he might have use magic to trick his opponents and use mostly his agility and speed. Which are his strongest strenghts.

That's a canon what I say(based on my observation in MCU, NOT the fanfics). He doesn't do magic blasts, but I'm sure he's good at avoiding being hit and has fast reflexes (Loki did grab the arrow ,without even looking, before it hit him). I could imagine Loki fighting Malekith with a dagger, dodging moves and maybe do illusions by going behind. Almost as good as what Frigga did. Speed and Agility.

What I imagine for the second chapter, Loki staying with his mother. Then an image enter my head, Loki walking down the golden halls then he was grabbed by Thor and lead to another room about a plan.

Though, I suppose it wouldn't be realistic. I imagine before that Thor had tried to convince Odin the plan. Then when Odin left, Frigga became all mysterious and winked at Thor. It wasn't until Thor realize that his mother was suggesting that they ask for Loki's help since he's great at plans. We all need a bit of mischief. I imagine Loki didn't want to do anything much and stays away with Odin, Thor and everyone. Loki wasn't much seen but Frigga always finds him either in her gardens or Loki's chamber. I imagine him he doesn't much see the point of escaping.

Thor will be a bit tricky because at that film, he lost hope of seeing the brother he loves back. But he does wish he could trust his brother. He will be much more conflict but I like to imagine Frigga encouraged Thor to reach out. And I believe Frigga encouraged Loki to reach out too. ;)

Who knows, I honestly hope in this fic that Loki doesn't 'fake' died and just comes with Thor to Midgard and battle the Dark Elves. Or that the Aether went to Loki instead of Malekith.

Hehehe. Good idea. I hope you plan to make this than a one-shot.
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