Reviews for Team Tragedy (Rewrite Ongoing)
Valen Goncalvez chapter 15 . 6/29/2019
Very good chapter, i hope you update another soon!
Sp1c3M0nst3r chapter 15 . 4/12/2019
Reaction: *screaming in euphoria*
Arianna Le Fay chapter 15 . 4/12/2019
in the revamp are you changing the pairing or the oc ?
Snowball A.K.A. WinterWolf chapter 14 . 11/3/2017
love it! Can't wait for more!
KKR chapter 14 . 8/22/2017
Saludos de nuevo, en primer lugar quiero felicitarte por tu bebe, enhorabuena, muchisimas felicitaciones. Tu pequeño/a es lo primero para cualquier madre que ame a su hijo/a. Aunque me sorprende siendo tan joven, porque sólo tienes 25/26 años, ¿no?
Pero por favor cuando tengas algo de tiempo, no te olvides de tu historia porque este capítulo esta genial como todo los demás.
¿Has leído alguna historia de Kushinada Uzumaki? Te las recomiendo, también tiene una página web donde pone una descripción de sus personajes correspondiente a su titulo de la historia. ¿Puedes si es posible, hacer lo mismo con tus personajes, por favor? También te recomiendo la historia de Kira's Ninja Adventure de BloodPokemon101.
Gracias de antemano, y espero con ilusión tus próximos capítulos y si es posible esas descripciones.
Que os vaya todo muy bien, suerte y mucho ánimo.
Gest chapter 14 . 8/15/2017
Update soon it was jest getting good.
Kittyfan17 chapter 14 . 8/4/2017
So when will the next update be.
Guest chapter 14 . 8/26/2016
Thanks I glad u didn't. Quit on me
AugustRrush chapter 14 . 8/24/2016
This was a awesome chapter and I look forward to reading more. Congrats on the baby and good luck job hunting.
Zonta chapter 5 . 8/23/2016
So far this is one of the more well written oc stories iv read with an original take on the characters. I love this chapter and the comical spin in the first half, I don't think I've ever laughed this much this early in the storyline, especially when they were blackmailing the hokage.
Arianna Le Fay chapter 14 . 8/23/2016
congratulations on the baby :D a great chapter as always i cant wait to see how the new team 7 will do :D
belladu57 chapter 14 . 8/23/2016
Very good
Jennku chapter 13 . 4/18/2016
Great job!

I can't blame Iruka for worrying since he was their sensei and he is a very caring individual. At the same time though, they aren't his students anymore and it's not his decision in what is best for them now. Kurenai, Asuma and Kakashi had it covered though, although I do know for a fact that Kakashi does care for Len and it has affected his decisions before like in the Land of Waves. I think they will all be fine in the end.

Iruka didn't realize it, but Sasuke is starting to care for Naruto and Len and maybe is feeling something a bit different for Len than Naruto. Luckily he came to his senses when Iruka dropped the transformation before he beat him up anymore. It's almost like Sasuke is getting a bit protective of Len.

For awhile I forgot who Animaru was since it's been awhile since the the members of the Katake family have been talked about; besides of Kakashi and Len of course. I wonder how that conversation will go. It's strange to me that he is in anbu attire if he is supposed to be considered a traitor. I'm hoping in the next chapter, Kakashi and Animaru have their long awaited conversation by Kakashi.

Len's outfit sounds a bit more than just interesting. I think it would have been adorable if Sasuke would have commented on her outfit but so out of character. doesn't surprise me that Sasuke didn't change his outfit up at all, Naruto technically didn't.

Seems like their plan is to just ignore the situation not the draw attention to themselves but also make it so weaker teams can't even attempt the exams. Wait, so Lee doesn't challenge Sasuke or he tries again before they get to the exam room? Well only one way to find out the answer to my question, wait for the next update.

Anyway, I look forward to reading the next chapter when you update next!

-Jennku
Guest chapter 13 . 4/13/2016
More Now
Hehehe...HahhaHaha!
Demona Evernight chapter 13 . 4/13/2016
lmao XD too funny I snickered through half of this story they're so funny and I like the subtle changes to the characters you've made (ie Naruto being less of an obvious idiot and Sasuke seems to have finally gotten that stick surgically removed from his ass) But I do wonder will Orochimaru still get his fangs into Sasuke? That is a big part to the original story line or are you gonna have it so that he's taken unwillingly? Like I said very curious to see how it will pan out so update again soon!
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